The Astro Father chapter 1: Vengeance (Major Gore Warning)

The Man lands in the Inkversian prison where the aggressor who “killed” Santiago Kesshō is held at but he didn’t go through the front door and instead made a hole through the roof the guards noticed the man bursting in without permission or access.

“AstroMan you don’t have the allowance from the Government to be here!” A guard yelled

“We will give you five seconds to get out of here!” Another guard said

AstroMan slapped the first guard away into a wall and looked into the eyes of the second guard.

“Where is the murderer of Santiago Kesshō” AstroMan demanded

“F-Follow me!” The second guard said in terror

“Just tell me the cell number” AstroMan said

“U-U-Uh it’s cell 533!” The guard said terrified.

“Thank you” AstroMan said as he walked away from the terrified guard

Meanwhile in Cell 533; The aggressor was being interrogated by two detectives.

“What motivated you to kill Santiago Kesshō!” The first detective said

“Why the f**k should I tell you!” The Aggressor said

“You will get real bad punishments from not telling us!” The second detective said

“Like what, I don’t care about your outdated legal punishments, so try again!” The Aggressor said “besides nobody in the government ranks can kill me!”

Suddenly the door to cell 533 swung open and AstroMan walked into the cell. AstroMan stared the Aggressor right in his puny face.

“I’m not in the government ranks” AstroMan said

“Shit” the Aggressor squeaked

“Why did you murder my son, Santiago Kesshō!” Astro man said

“Wait… you’re a superhero, HAH, you can’t kill me!” The Aggressor said

“Don’t get you hopes up” AstroMan said

“go ahead, your reputation as a hero will diminish if you killed me!” The Aggressor said

“What a shame!” AstroMan said, “I don’t have that problem”

AstroMan suddenly grabbed the left arm of the Aggressor and tore it off effortlessly. The Aggressor bleeds over the floor and clavicle is exposed in the torn off left arm.

“WHOA WHOA WHOA you can’t do that to our suspect!” The Detectives said

“I just did” AstroMan said as he looked back at the aggressor, “Let’s try that again”

“I-I-I’ll tell you anything!” The Aggressor said

“Good now tell me why you murdered my son!” AstroMan yelled

“H-H-He was an Inkperial shitter with the power of destruction, I-I-I had to kill h-“ The Aggressor was cut off as AstroMan tore off the Aggressor’s right arm.

“I AM GOING TO FEED YOU YOUR OWN HEART!” AstroMan yelled

The Detectives look at AstroMan with some terror as AstroMan shoots his arm into the Aggressor’s chest and rips his beating heart. AstroMan forces the aggressor’s mouth open and pries the aggressor’s heart in the mouth of the aggressor.

“Now chew” AstroMan said as he pressed the Aggressor’s nearly torn bottom jaw on the Aggressor’s own heart. The heart exploded and blood flies everywhere.

The Aggressor’s remaining body falls to the ground and AstroMan walks out of the building calmly. The Next day later, AstroMan is watching the news when he sees an immigrant Bloodhawkian woman on screen as the reporter.

“The Bloodhawks have Infiltrated Inkversian society!?!” AstroMan shouted in surprise, “That needs to be fixed”

AstroMan quickly puts in his super suit that still had some blood on it and flew over to the scene. AstroMan soon arrived at the scene and the cameraman stepped back a bit.

“Get out of the Inkverse, Communist scum” AstroMan scolded the Bloodhawkian Immigrant.

“I’m a legal immigrant though” The reporter said

“You aren’t Inkversian so leave” AstroMan scolded her

“This just in, AstroMan is racist!” The reporter said

AstroMan stepped closer to the reporter.

“Mai, RUN!” The cameraman yelled to the reporter

Mai started to run away from AstroMan but AstroMan floated in front of Mai and grabbed her by the neck.

“LET ME GO!” Mai yelled

The Cameraman knew he couldn’t help her but he filmed the scene of AstroMan breaking Mai’s neck.

The Cameraman started to run faster and faster away from the scene but AstroMan kept up with him easily.

“Turn that camera off now!” AstroMan yelled

“NEVER!” The Cameraman yelled

“Fine then you’ll die!” AstroMan yelled

As AstroMan zoomed at the cameraman, a portal of creation opened behind him, and AstroMan stopped mid flight to look behind him.

“Who are you and what are you doing here!” AstroMan said

“I’m here to stop you!” Astra said as she walked out of the portal

AstroMan looked at Data top to bottom and laughed at her.

“What do you think you’ll do, MACHINE!” AstroMan said to Astra

“You’re a bloodthirsty evil man!” Astra yelled

“I’m just making the Inkverse a better place, without the Bloodhawkians!” AstroMan said

“You are making the Inkverse a worse place actually!” Astra yelled

“BULLSHIT!” AstroMan yelled back

Astra started to run at AstroMan and AstroMan waited for Astra to get closer. Astra pulled her staff out and slashed at AstroMan’s face. The blade cut a small portion of his cheek but he didn’t budge at all.

“Really, that’s it!” AstroMan said

Astra angrily grumbled and she quickly empowered a punch with the power of creation and punched AstroMan in the chest with it. The punch hit AstroMan but he didn’t budge again.

“Playtime is over” AstroMan said as he threw a punch at Astra

Astra is hit and she flies into 5 buildings. Astra gets back up and runs back toward AstroMan’s previous location. As she arrives to his location, she notices he isn’t there, and she starts to look around for him.

“Heads up” AstroMan said as he slammed into her from above.

Astra and AstroMan both were slammed into a subway station. Astra quickly got back up on her feet and AstroMan shot himself up onto his feet. Astra pulled her staff out again and quickly thrusted one of the ends at AstroMan. AstroMan quickly dodged all the thrusts when Astra quickly swung the other side at AstroMan. AstroMan caught the swing side quickly and grabbed the side Astra had been using to thrust at him. AstroMan quickly struck the middle of the staff with his knee which snapped the staff into two.

“How pitiful that you try to stand against me with your double sided pointy stick!” AstroMan said

“H-HOW DID YOU BREAK OMEGA ALLOY!?!” Astra panicked

“With perfect technique” AstroMan said

AstroMan suddenly “teleported” behind Astra and grabbed her by the back of her head.

AstroMan and Astra soon hear a metro train coming and the people who were watching the fight quickly scrambled away. Astra tried to escape AstroMan’s grip but his grip was too strong on the back of her head. AstroMan flew over to the open tracks and held Astra in front of the incoming train.

“DON’T YOU DARE DO THIS YOU KNOCK OFF OMNI-MAN!” Astra yelled

“What was that?” AstroMan said

“YOU HEARD ME!” Astra said

“I’ll make sure the blood is on you and not me” AstroMan said as he started to fly toward the incoming train.

The Train and AstroMan slammed into each other as Astra kept crashing and killing tons of innocent civilians… getting the blood of the civilians on her while AstroMan deflected the blood of the civilian on to Astra. Soon AstroMan and Astra got to the next stop and AstroMan threw the bloody Astra down in front of plenty of civilians.

“Look here, This filthy excuse of a girl robot killed all those innocent train passengers!” AstroMan said deceivingly

The civilians saw Astra all bloody and the clean AstroMan and all thought Astra was the murderer of the passengers. The civilians took pictures and videos of the murderous Astra and posted it all over social media platforms all over the multiverse. Astra slowly got up and saw all the blood on her hands and realized what AstroMan did.

“N-n-no, it’s his fault!” Astra pointed at AstroMan

“How could it be my fault when you are the one covered in blood!” AstroMan said at Astra

“You pushed me through that train!” Astra said

“You see people, she is trying to blame your heroic savior of manslaughter when she did it!” AstroMan said

Astra looked behind and around her to the the crowd of people framing her.

“Oh no… he has them convinced…” Astra realized

Astra quickly made a portal of creation and got out of the situation. AstroMan soon left as well and got back to his home and turned on the tv to see the news.

“Beloved Hero Astra is secretly a murderer!?!” The reporter said in shock.

“Good, now that inferior robot shall be hated and dismantled!” AstroMan said

Meanwhile in the Realm of Creation, Astra falls to the ground in her room covered in blood. She crawls to the door and tried to get up.

“I couldn’t stop him…” Astra cried

Collector and Hakai walked to Astra’s room and opened the door to see her covered in blood.

“Astra… what did you do?” Collector said in concern

"how dare they have prejudice against a former inkversian soldier that did do some bad things "
*proceeds to be racist*

Ok do you wanna know my ONE critique of your stories?

Ye go ahead

The dialogue in your stories feel a bit dry to me

(Also is this canon)

Yeah I know my dialogue is dry in my stories and I don’t know how to fix it

(Yes)

Ok

(Damn-)

I’m sorry though

Nah it’s fine

Maybe try to make the characters talk less formally? If that makes sense?

Collector: ... That aggressor won't be the only one eating his own heart.

Traveler: Out of canon here but HOLY SHIT.
NOT EVEN MY FATHER WAS THAT BRUTAL

*Inkmatas walked in while the Collector was saying that*
Inkmatas: What happened

Collector: off-brand viltrumite framed astra for killing an entire subway of people

Inkmatas: That… Do you want emotional support for right now

Collector: astra needs it more than me. She just went face-first through an entire subway

Inkmatas: *Hugs Astra in emotional support*

Astra: *bloody and traumatized*

Inkmatas: I’m sorry that had to happen to you but I know we can beat this bad guy

Astra: wait... MY SPEAR!!!

Collector: what about it?

Astra: it's snapped in half and still in the subway tunnel!

Collector: how did he- ... Don't worry. I'll go get it.

IP: *angy* yup.

I'm sorry but he is literally OmniMan

I know

Also

The camera man never died and still has the camera with the footage

Hmmmm

Give me a second to explain what happened in Sub-chapter 1

Uh oh

oh damn

bro was able to deflect blood, he really does has perfect technique-

Oh boy, we got ourselves a HomeLander here.

Technically AstroMan is a mix between Omni-man and HomeLander

But still, he's being the HomeLander, a f**king egotist maniac

Knock off omni man fr.
Great story btw