JE SUIS LE SANS DE TOPIQUE-

Do you mean revamping sprites, or revamping lore/backstories/personality?

lore and backstories and personality

System of Interaction
Solar System
Ghost Ash (Mega Octagon)
Ash Foster
Demoncat
Crimson
Spotlight
Grin
Trader

also dont focus on oc originality i just want general opinion so i can know if anything needs to be improved in my ocs

Crimson, cause I think she's so cute in the textboxes, although my brother Red doesn't want to ship Outer : ( (I will find a way to convince him BWAHAHAHAHA)
Ash is an interesting character
Solar System of course, cause SHIP!
And System of Interaction, because you're awesome

(oo i see what you did there >:3)
also ty, ill keep the info in mind :3

My brother is washing dishes, so I am here to inform you on his behalf: He thought you meant improve the sprites, not in general. He was saying whose sprites he wanted to see improved.

ohh i see. i dont know how to draw Clober sprites-

It's ok. I thought you were going to remaster them.
But now that I know better, I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS, will reevaluate my answers.
I'm also newer, so I'm probably missing important lore information as well.
I wouldn't mind more backstory on Crimson, and how they came to be able to think for themselves (I also missed out on the Cloberpocalypse, so....)
Still Solar, cause SHIP!

Ok, so pretty much the same list, minus the crimson ship

ah i see, fair enough lol
i'm preparing some textboxes for Crimson's origins, dw

lol

I like ghost ash's personality and how they're two different people, but I still want to see him not posessed.

putting him not being possessed aside, how does he seem?

Pretty nice character

evil enough? lol

Ghost Ash definitely gives the vibes of a "True Evil Villain"
Idrk abt Grin
but Crimson is cute

real

Ash need more screentime (not Ghost Ash)
like WE NEED MORE INFO

abt Solar...
she need more of her own story rather than SHIP

youre right lol
notef

BY IMPROVE I MEAN PERSONALITY AND LORE-