MINI STORY: Fall Of The King

*the scene takes place on The Monolith, the main warship of the Empire, where Tronus is sitting on a throne, waiting*

Dark Matter Advisor: Sir, the intruders on the Dyson Sphere is being dealt with, however we have detected 3 signals nearby the Monolith. 2 are mechanical while one is organic.

Tronus: Collector and his dolls... Put all security on high alert. We must be prepared for his arrival.

Dark Matter Advisor: Yes sire.

*the Advisor walks off*

Tronus: Today will be the day where i spread his blood across the stars and have the universe hear his screams.

*alarms start blaring with red flashing lights*

Tronus: Hes here.

*Tronus gets up and gets his sword ready, where it gains a white fire around the blade*

Tronus: Come out, Collector.

*a bunch of blasters and slashing would be heard behind some blast doors, before the doors explode, revealing Collector in the smoke*

Tronus: Long time no see, Collector.

*Collector just walks menacingly towards Tronus, not saying anything*

Tronus: Not talkative aren't you?..

Collector: Consider this not be a fight. But a execution.

*Collector immediately launches himself towards Tronus, with his sword aiming towards his chest*

Tronus: GAH!

*Tronus uses one of his forearm blades to block the attack, which Tronus then gets his sword out, where the two clash blades*

Tronus: DIE! LIKE YOUR KIN!

*Collectors sword just glows more, where Collector does a spin slash and kicks Tronus on a wall*

Tronus: Eurgh... Alright then...

*Tronus gets up and lunges at Collector, which he does a left hook, cracking Collectors visor*

Tronus: WEAK!

*Collector would be unphased by his visor cracking, which he swings his sword at Tronus*

Tronus: WASTE OF BIOMASS!

*Tronus uses his arm blade again to deflect the sword, where he then does a uppercut*

*Collector would get in the air, where he lands on his feet*

Collector: Ugh...

Tronus: PERISH!

*Tronus charges at Collector, but Collector fires a beam of energy at Tronus, sending him into his throne, where he then gets out the rubble*

Tronus: Eurgh..

*Tronus takes a bit of white glowing blood from the rubble and looks at Collector*

Tronus: All of that for only a drop of blood?... *chuckle*

*Collector just fires more beams at Tronus, which Tronus deploys his shield to try and block the incoming energy*

*Tronus then just runs over, shield on and does a right hook, knocking Collector to the ground*

*Collector spins around and fires a big slash of blue energy, knocking Tronus to the other side of the room*

Tronus: *speaking a few Coritan words*

*Tronus then summons his sword*

*Collector summons in a crystal barrier and sends it towards Tronus, where Tronus just struggles a bit but shatters the barrier*

Collector: You actually think you will survive this, dont you?

Tronus: I've lived for eons, boy. Why wont you let me save this universe.

Collector: Why are you doing this, why?

Tronus: FOR THE UNIVERSE! FOR OUR HOME! WHAT TIME DESTROYED I CAN REBUILD BUT ONLY IF I CAN RULE OVER IT ALL!

Collector: This is insanity, Tronus. Your sacrificing races that doesn't deserve this. Your no better then the ones who have tried to destroy this universe.

Tronus: YOU ARE A BLIND FOOL! I AM THE UNIVERSES SAVING GRACE!

Collector: All stars and planets die eventually, Tronus. You must accept that. Its nature. Do not disrupt nature.

Tronus: GOING BY NATURE MADE MY PLANET PAY THE PRICE! I AM THE LAST OF MY KIND!

Collector: *clenched a fist, which his gauntlet turns into the jaws of a dragon*

Collector: STAND. DOWN.

Tronus: NEVER!

*Tronus tackles Collector through the walls, which the two are now on the ships hull on top*

*Collector shoves the dragon head on tronus's face and it emits a loud piercing screech, stunning Tronus long for Collector to slash Tronus many times with his blade*

*Tronus gets knocked back a bit by the attacks, where hes clearly dazed a bit*

Collector: Sounds familiar does it?

*Tronus growls and grabs Collectors head and shoves it on the hull, dragging it across which breaks more of Collectors helmet and it shows one of Collectors eyes*

Collector: GRAH!

*Collector kicks Tronus off*

Tronus: YOU HAVE GROWN WEAK!

*Tronus lunges towards Collector and does a massive punch to Collectors ribcage, which a crunch is heard from Collectors chest*

*collector coughs up some blood*

Collector: Congratulations. That actually hurt.

*Collector grabs Tronus's protrusions on his helmet and just starts kneeing his head, which breaks off a piece of Tronus's helmet*

Tronus: GRAH!

*Tronus and Collector starts tussling arms a bit, where then Collector headbutts Tronus*

Tronus: ALWAYS THE BRAVEST OF THEM!

*Collector starts slashing and stabbing his swords onto Tronus's shield*

Tronus: BUT YOU COULD NEVER MAKE THE HARD DECISIONS!

*Tronus does a few slashes*

Tronus: OUR UNIVERSE WILL SURVIVE!

Collector: NO!-

*Tronus does a stab on Collectors shoulder and does a slash, which it slashes off Collectors arm*

Collector: ARUGH...

*Tronus kicks Collector down, which Collector tries to reach his sword but gets stabbed repeataly by Tronus's blade, which starts breaking Collectors armor even more, with blood soaking his suit too*

Collector: AUGH!

Tronus: COLLECTOR... FOR TREASON AGINEST THE EMPIRE AND THE PREVENTATION OF SALVATION... I SENTANCE YOU.. TO DEATH!

*Tronus gets his sword ready to plunge it into Collectors back, but then Tronus gets shot in the back a few times by a green energy blaster, which has little to no effect to Tronus*

*Tronus turns his back to see the source, but then Data comes out of no where and holds Tronus's head back, while Astra throws her spear at Tronus's ankle, getting him to kneel down a bit*

Tronus: GRAH... INSECTS!

*Tronus backhands Astra into a wall, breaking her arm and then he grabs Data and repeatably punches Datas face, smashing her screen in*

Tronus: YOU TWO WILL BE EXECUTED AS WELL!

Data: *glitchy voice* You sure about that?...

*Data kicks Tronus in the face, which she lands on the hull and Astra gets her arm fixed with her nano tech*

Tronus: YOU ALL ARE LIKE KNATS TO ME!

*Tronus fires some cosmic energy beams at them, making Astra and Data retreat a bit behind some pieces of the hull*

Tronus: COME ON OUT!

*Data and Astra get out the hiding spot and just fire their guns at Tronus, which Tronus just summons his war shield again to block them*

Data: GET THE SHIELD OFF HIM! I WILL DISTRACT HIM!

Astra: GOT IT!

*Astra jumps on Tronus's warshield and starts pulling it while Data fuses her guns together and fires more powerful shots at Tronus*

Tronus: DISGUSTING!

*Tronus reforms his shield into a wrist dagger, which he impales Astra on it while hes getting pushed back a bit by Datas blasters*

*Astra reforms out of the Dagger and gets back with Data*

Tronus: YOU THINK YOU TWO CAN TAKE ME ON ALONE?!

Astra: Whats the point if we dont try?

*Tronus gets his sword ready and turns to Collector, but before he could react, a big stab is heard, where Tronus is there, heavily breathing where he looks down, where the Collectors blade is stabbed in his chest, where Collector is holding it, wielding it with one arm*

Tronus: You...

*Tronus raises his blade, but drops it down below off the warships hull*

Tronus; Gh...

*Tronus kneels down a bit, and just holds the blade thats still in his chest*

Collector: Remember my face, Tronus. It'll be the last one you see as every horrible crime you've committed flashes through your mind.

*Tronus would breathe more heavily, which his core and glowing accents start to flicker a bit*

Tronus: Forgive me my people... As ive failed to bring salvation... In this... Cold... Dark.. Space...

Rex: LORD TRONUS! NO!

*Tronus's accents and core turns dark, which he slowly slides off the Collectors sword, where Tronus is seen falling into Earths asthomophere, where hes seen burning up before disappearing fully*

Collector: Good work...

Astra: No problem.

*Data would be half counsicuis on the ground*

Astra: Will she be ok?

Collector: Most likely.

*in the distance, the Dyson Sphere would start to glow a bit dimmer, which then it explodes*

Astra: looks like the rest of the team did a good job. Now let's get out of here before this warship ends up like the sphere

*Collector puts his sword away*

Collector: Put Data on my shoulders, you can grab the weapons and my severed arm.

Astra: ... Why the arm?

Collector: I'll separate my armor from it while I grow a new one.

*the 3 then fly off to the Valkerie, where everyone is there, with some wounds, but overall ok*

A.I.: MISSION ACCOMPLISHED.

Collector: with some... minor inconveniences, yes. Mission accomplished.

*Everyone looks horrified the moment they see collector, he's never taken this much damage before... at least not within their lifetimes*

Data: *sarcastically* Take a picture while you can, I'd say dismembered collector is a once in a lifetime sight but this is probably beyond just one lifetime

Astra: *still holding Collectors arm* Data >:(

A.I.: RETURNING ALL ORGANISMS AND MACHINES TO HOME.

Collector: Ah home...

Infernal: Hey after this, who wants some drinks?

*a few of the characters cheer a bit*

*END*

Who the hell is Rex lmaoooo???

An old oc of mine

A servent of Tronus

Wait I thought you were gonna post this after the event RP's

I did

I thought there were gonna be more lol

nah

Guess I'm just dumb

Schizophrenia

A: I want a drink :3

what

A: infernal said he buy drinks

LETS GO ONE OF MY CHARACTERS WAS FEATURED!!

Coolio

I can see your inspiration for the fight. This is really good though

yippeeee

Not my favourite story, certainly forced myself to read to the end.
It felt slow, lots of spaces and I couldn't really imagine the scenes

Man, i was trying my best-

Ay i give critique, this is one of the few times I read your stories

It's not that my stories are any better but one important thing is not adding too many spaces, or else it can affect the reading pace

I try to add spaces so people do not get sentances or words mixed up

Bossfights users when someone gives critique instead of copy pasting “peak”

Nugget, i wasnt saying the critque is bad. I was just saying i tried my best in this. I worked on this for a soild month, thinking and scrapping multiple ways how this could have ended

critique still applies
it’s still a good story tho

Liam: Damn he was pretty strong here.

X: Dude you didn't even do shit

oh, OH, THE PEAK

A couple critiques: you wrote it like an rp, I’d recommend not doing that as it makes it a bit harder to read

Also, any time you make a character SAY “agh”, it isn’t very descriptive, you just convey that they’re in pain without showing it
I don’t know if that makes sense but I feel like doing “Collector: GRAH!” Could be done as “as tronus drags his face across the ground, collector lets out a yell of agony”

But I did like the fight

Tbf we roleplayed the whole battle beforehand, though skull ditched a couple things.

For example the dragon jaw gauntlet collector used was actually meant to be a replica of a Verslashion jaw

Ok so.. he did even write it?

*didnt

Well he told me his idea beforehand, we talked a bit, did the roleplay, then he refined it into this

Mainly because not a lot of people remember Verslashions

Well I could've made a post like I mentioned before

1: Sorry about that, i just wanted it so the words dont look jumbled up

2: I could try to do that

3: thank

Perfect story