Apokalypsis Nova - Final Chapter

The sun is shining through the leaves of trees and the ground below is shaking.

A spaceship lifting into the sky, shaking the air around it.

Collector is commanding the ship, Traveler's Uncle is the co-pilot.
Traveler is behind them, a sword appears in his hand.

Astra, Collector's android daughter, decided to come with them, even though Collector said no multiple times.
The ship leaves the atmosphere.

The ship accelerates past the sun, and goes even faster, faster than light itself, leaving a blueish tail behind.

-Universe-
#Open space#

Collector: A wormhole is near here, we could use that to travel faster.

Uncle: Good idea *looks at a radar of some sorts* There's one near Sagittarius A

Collector: Perfect.

Meanwhile Astra was practicing hitting a dummy when Traveler approached her.

Astra: Mmh?

Traveler: Hey, why did you decide to come with us?

Astra: I wanted to give a hand *hits the dummy*
Traveler: But you could get hurt

*Astra hits the dummy harder*
Astra: I'M NOT THAT WEAK!

*Traveler backs away scared*

Traveler: S-sorry eheh *scratches his head*

Traveler walks back to Collector, he asks him the progress and Collector tells him that soon they'll reach the wormhole.

Traveler sits down and contemplates his fate. Astra continues to bully the dummy, Traveler's uncle eats a bit of frozen beer and Collector flicks a few switches to prepare the ship for the wormhole.

-Universe-
#Sagittarius A#

The ship was getting pulled a bit by the blackhole, but not too much. It flew towards a white dot near the black hole.

Uncle: That's it, right there.

The ship advanced, and it got pulled into the wormhole!
Bright lights passed by, colors flashed, the ship's controls jammed and Astra got sent back into the posterior wall.

-Wormhole-
#Info#

Let's have a little break which is totally unnecessary but why not.
Collector is a human, I think, that got hit by a blue rock and gained powers.
Traveler is a demigod that has an overpowered father that threatens to destroy the Universe.
Traveler's uncle is a God. Not much else to say.
Astra is a sentient android that can fight. Pretty cool.
Why did i say this?
Hehe

To waste your time :D

-Universe-
#Ancient Terra’s Moons#

They have arrived at Ancient Terra, or at least the orbits of its gigantic moons.

Ancient Terra has 10 different moons which are all basically the size of earth.

The star is much smaller than Ancient Terra, yet Ancient Terra still orbits the star.

Astra: It's… It's beautiful!

Traveler gets up
Traveler: Yeah, certainly one of a kind.

The controls get fixed automatically, a genius move engineered by Collector.

Collector: Where should I land?

Uncle: On the planet, be careful, you might encounter asteroids.

A bit later and they arrive on the planet's surface.

-Ancient Terra-
#Random Valley#

They all get off the ship, the air is breathable, but the gravity is 10 times stronger.

Traveler: W-woah. I can barely lift my arm!

Uncle: Good, I've been here before, this is nothing to me. You and Collector have about a year of time to train

Collector: What? Why?

Uncle: My “brother in law” or whatever you humans call that, is not that fast with flying, he'll arrive here in about a year.

Traveler: What? I didn't come here to train!

Uncle: *facepalms* If you came here without being adapted to its atmosphere and its gravity then you would be dead before you could land a punch on him.

And so after a motivational slap, Collector and Traveler started training.
Why are they doing so? Ask the Author, I'm the Narrator.

27/5/3030

After a whole year of non-stop training, weirdly Astra didn't need to train, maybe because she automatically adapted to the gravity, Traveler and Collector were ready, and the ship's radar caught something in the distance. Or someone.

In the sky, the mighty God of Apocalypse descended upon the planet.

Traveler's uncle hid behind the ship and prepared to run.

Hee touched the ground and looked at Traveler, then at Collector and Astra.

Hee: I see you brought some friends.

Traveler's uncle started running in a straight line, he accelerated faster and faster, he wanted to go around the planet to build up speed and power to strike Hee.

Astra got ready to throw her spear.

Traveler: 3 against 1, I think your odds are pretty low.

Hee: Pathetic, truly pathe-

*Astra’s spear flew towards Hee, it hit Hee’s hand, piercing it and sticking it to the ground*

*Hee grabbed the spear and threw it away, he turned around but was greeted by Collector's friendly fist.

Collector punched him and stepped back, Traveler teleported in and started comboing the hell out of Hee.

Basically he teleported after hitting Hee, then he would hit him again and teleport to another side.

Hee got mad and Traveler got pushed away, but Collector stepped in and started throwing punches, they had such an impact each punch created a mini shockwave. Collector was certainly slower than Traveler, but he was much stronger.
There were 14 punches.

Collector then uppercut Hee, stunning him, and stepped back again.

Traveler teleported in and got in position with the One Inch Punch. Traveler was airborne because Hee was very tall.

After a few deep breaths he punched him right in the stomach.

Hee backed away and Traveler landed.

Hee: Urgh, Pathetic animals! I should have terminated you humans when I had the chance!

Meanwhile Traveler's Uncle was only half of the way there, he went faster and faster, his speed growing exponentially.

He left a trail of light blue electricity, but he wasn't fast enough.

Uncle: I….. need…. to… go.. FASTER

*A purple shockwave blasted from him, his trail becoming purple*

In a matter of seconds he was behind Hee, and with all the momentum gathered, he punched Hee full force!

A flash of light, even Astra couldn't see.

What was left behind was a trail of dirt, in the distance a mountain was crumbling.

Hee got up from the debris of the mountain.

Hee: Urgh… my head… *putting his hand on his head*

Traveler: Woah, that was something

Hee: *gets madder*

*He jumps down from the mountain and lands in the valley*

Traveler and Collector dash forward to attack, but Hee moves fast and punched both.

Collector and Traveler are sent back, but traveler teleports to Hee and starts teleporting all around him, making after images.

Hee: Trying to hide?

The after images start attacking Hee, punching once and disappearing, they attack from every side.

Hee goes in a defensive position, ready to counter, but Traveler disappeared and Collector was ready to punch Hee again.

Collector punched him twice and on the second punch Hee backed away.

Hee: errhAAAA!

Hee started comboing the hell out of Collector, each punch felt like a meteor.
Then he punched Collector in the face, making him fly past Traveler.

Traveler teleported Infront of Hee, but Hee threw a punch at Traveler.

!Counter!

Traveler started punching him, hitting all the vital parts before throwing on last punch into Hee’s stomach.

Hee bent over in pain, holding his stomach.
He closed his eyes but looked back in front of him, he couldn't see Traveler.

Where is he?! He thought, he turned around.

Traveler's fist was inches away from his face, but Hee caught his fist.

Traveler teleported away, not wanting his hand to get crushed.

Astra jumped up in the air and kicked Hee in the face, Hee barely flinched and slapped Astra away.

Astra didn't get hit. Astra dodged the attack and jumped on Hee's shoulders.

She stabbed him with her spear but her spear barely even penetrated his skin.

Hee shook her off and took out the spear from his back.
He threw the spear away.

Hee yelled while a dark red aura appeared around him.

[Enraged Hei]
ATT x5
DEF x5

Hee appeared behind Collector and beat him to the ground, grabbing his head and slamming it multiple times in the ground, then he dashed towards Astra but Astra dodged most of his attacks until Hee swept her leg and punched her in the face.

Then he dashed towards Traveler, Traveler dodged his attacks, but they were getting faster and faster.

A single drop of sweat came off of Traveler's forehead and Hee punched him sending him away.

Collector, trying to get up, saw both his friend and his daughter get beaten up and decided to start using his true power.

Collector's fists glew bright blue, he dashed and punched Hee in his right leg, then he jumped up and punched him 3 times in the chest and finished with side kick to the head.

All of it happened in less than a second.
Collector landed behind Hee, Hee kneeled to the ground.

Suddenly Collector's sword appeared, and Collector was going to go a little more serious.

Collector uppercut Hee into the sky, they were so high up they could see the clouds face to face.

Collector jumped up too and started slicing the hell out of Hee.

This went on for 4 minutes, and Collector prepared to do one final strike.
His sword glew even brighter.

And he sliced aiming for Hee's head.

…

-Wormhole-
#Intermission#

Now's the good chance to put an intermission! :D

Traveler has a human body, meaning he suffers pain like we do.
Collector is human but his body is tougher, he hasn't even gone fully serious!
Astra is a robot, she can't really feel pain but it's important she doesn't get too damaged.
Hee on the other hand is a God, his skin is tougher than everything! But why did Astra's spear cut his skin? It was probably infused with the power of creation.

Traveler's uncle is also a God, but he's one of the weaker ones.
If Collector desired it, with enough training and willpower, he could become a God! It's possible for a mortal to become immortal, but it's really hard.

Should I end the intermission? Idk…

…

#End of Intermission#

Collector's blade was stopped, but how?

Hee's skin was… different.
It was like stone. The blade didn't even crack it.

[True God Form Hei]
ATK x500
DEF x500

Hee: HahahahahHAHAHHAHAHA

He appeared behind Collector and smashed him down to the ground.

His skin was tougher than any other material, it was God Stone, a second skin.
It is indestructible and impenetrable.

Collector got up from the ground but Hee appeared behind him and grabbeb his head, smashing it into the ground, then he threw Collector in the sky.

He jumped up and started a powerful combination of punches, finishing with one big punch.

Collector was sent flying into a mountain.

Hee levitated back down and saw Astra, he slowly walked to her.

Hee: Hah

He raised his hand, charging up a powerful blast.

Astra didn't know what to do.

Hee shot his blast, Astra tried blocking it.

Collector stood Infront of the blast, tanking the hit.
Hee dashed forward to punch Collector but he caught Hee's punch.

Hee: Mmh, Impressive for a mortal, it would be a waste to kill you.

He slapped Collector away so hard that not even your mom would be able to slap ya that hard.

Collector went flying again into the mountainside.

Hee: You on the other hand *looks at astra* I can beat you with one finger

He punched a hole through Astra's torso with his finger, sending Astra flying away.

Traveler was behind Hee, but Hee knew it, he stomped on Traveler's foot, he grabbed him and slammed him into the ground, he kept on slamming him, over and over and over.
Then he put his two hands together and smashed him once more.

Traveler was bleeding, nuh duh.
Astra was trying to repair herself.
Collector was unconscious.

Hee levitated into the sky.

Hee: It's time to end this

???: Not so f-fast!

*Traveler was getting up, all bloody, one or two teeth were gone from his mouth and his torso was just wet of blood*

Hee: Give up son, this Universe is doomed.

Traveler: N-No… it's not…

Hee went on laughing.

Traveler: I still have a technique left…

Traveler clenched his fists, his face red with blood.

His eyes becoming white.

Suddenly a gigantic beam of light exploded into the sky.

The wind produced by it woke Collector up. He was very confused.

When the light dissipated, Hee could observe the man standing below him.

Traveler had a white aura around him, his eyes glowing white. His hat he usually wears was gone.

[Awakened Traveler]
ATK x1000
DEF x1000

Traveler levitated into the sky, at the same level of Hee.

Hee: Finally, something a little less pathetic.

Traveler didn't speak.

Hee dashed forward and so did Traveler.

Punches were thrown from each side, but none of them were powerful enough to hurt each other.

The impacts shook the entire planet.

Hee's fists were glowing dark red and Traveler's glowing white.

Traveler was being overpowered, Hee was just too strong.

Traveler dashed back, clenched his fist and preformed his best attack yet.

Ultimate Light Fist!

When the punch hit Hee, a beam of light came from the other side.

Basically the entire planet was flashbanged.

But hee was unphased, the second skin he had was far too tough.

Collector was getting up, he was mad and very annoyed.

His fists glowed bright blue.

[Serious Collector]
ATK x5000
DEF x5000

“Wait, you mean he wasn't even going serious until now?!?!” I guessed you would ask that so, yeah he wasnt.

Collector jumped from the mountainside towards Hee and preformed his best attack yet

Ultimate Fist of Creation!

That punch, with all that power, flashbanged everything again but with a blue hue.

When the blue flashbang dissipated, Hee's second skin cracked, crumbled and dissapeared.

His defence dropped but his strength was still alot.

Collector: That's how you throw a punch

Traveler: show off

Hee fell to the ground, confused and suprised.

Collector and Traveler landed on the ground.

Epic fight scene? Maybe.
Intermission? YES

-Wormhole-
#Intermission#

What did astra do all this time? Absolutely nothing. Jk

Why didn't i call Collector “Awakened”? Cause that is a final form that needs to be achieved, so since Collector is the strongest of all, i just made him Serious.

Awakened Traveler would be able to 1v1 base form collector.
(Devilish will kill me lol)

End of intermission? No
More intermission? ABSOLUTELY

Hee is a God, so Traveler being able to keep up with him puts him at God level, at least for power.

For the next scenes, I'm between bored and uninspired so you'll have to wait for those.

#End of Intermission#

Collector and Traveler dashes towards Hee, and started beating the hell out of him.
Traveler did quick attacks, teleporting in and out.
Collector did many heavy attacks, giving space for Traveler to attack.

But then, as always, Hee got enraged and grabbed the heads of both and slammed them to the ground.

Traveler teleports both out of the ground, Hee dashed forward and threw a punch. But Collector caught it.

Even if Hee's hand is three times as big as Collector's.

Collector threw him away and Traveler started again to beat him up.

Hee was blocking the attacks and was ready to counter but then Traveler dissapeared and Collector did a flying kick right in Hee's nuts.

Traveler: *flabbergasted*

Hee: *in pain but not for long*

Anyways, they keep on fighting... for 5 whole hours.

Traveler steps back while Collector punches Hee into a mountain.

Traveler: We will never make it, he's a God! Also, this technique I'm using makes me run out of energy real fast... *Heavy breathing*

*His eyes go back to normal, and the aura he had dissapears*

Collector: Shit

Hee dashed towards Collector, but Collector blocked him and held him in place

Traveler dashed forward to punch Hee but when he did, he dealt 0 fr

Hee pushed Collector away, Collector tried to punch him but Hee caught his fist.

Hee: Hit me again

Traveler was confused and stunned, but he punched Hee again with full force, nothing, just a normal human punch.

Hee: HAH, just when i was starting to think you were less pathetic.

Hee slaps Traveler away.

Collector though punched Hee so hard in the gut that Hee went flying past the mountains.

Collector ran to Traveler.

Collector: What happened?

Traveler: I used up all my energy *Collector helps Traveler up*
Traveler: But even if I didn't, we couldn't kill him... He's a God, he's Immortal. Mortals, no matter how strong, can't kill Immortals. Only Immortals can kill Immortals.

Collector: So we would have to be Gods?

Traveler: Yeah, but there's no way- *something struck Traveler* Wait. Maybe, just maybe.

*Something struck Traveler again*

Traveler: She actually listened to my prayer

Collector: Who?

Traveler: My great great grandmother
She gave me Godly Power *hands over his hand for an ancient handshake*
*Collector grabs Traveler's arm*
*Energy starts transferring from Traveler to Collector*
Collector: I'm confused.

Traveler: She gave me enough godly power to make the both of us Gods.

Collector: Huh?

Traveler: But this power is temporary, it will only last until we defeat Hee. Until then, we will both be immortal.

Traveler let go of Collector's arm and so did Collector.

Collector: I don't feel much different

Traveler: That's because you need to transform into a God.

Collector: Let me guess, We have Godly Potential? I read it somewhere in one of the Books of Alexandria.
Traveler: Couldn't have said it better.

*Traveler focussed and flashbanged everything*

*When the light dissipated, he had white eyes again, but this time they were glowing brighter, he also had an aura, even brighter than before. He also emitted small orbs of light*
*His body also got bigger, more muscular*

Collector: Too flashy

*Collector focused, he closed his eyes. When he opened them, a powerful wind bursted from him, shaking the entire planet*

Collector wasn't much different. He emitted small blue orbs… oh also his eyes are blue now. How did I not notice that?
Also, same thing, he got bigger.

Collector: Woah, I feel rejuvenated… like if a 80 year old man got 60 years of age back.

Traveler: Weird analogy but yeah that's the concept

Traveler teleport to Hee, which at this point was miles away and grabbed him, throwing him into the air.
Out of nowhere Collector punched Hee in the stomach, Traveler teleported up and comboed the hell out of him too.

Traveler teleported away and Collector smashed Hee into the ground.

Traveler teleported down and grabbed Hee again.
Hee got free from his grasp and tried to attack Traveler, but he dodged and punched him a few times, finishing with one heavy punch, which Hee felt, a lot.

Collector then stepped in and punched him a few times, then finishing with a very strong creation charged punch. The punch shattered Hee's ribs.

Traveler teleported around Hee, punching him, kicking and attacking in any way.

Hee was about to counterattack but he was being overpowered and his defense was shattered.

Collector stepped in with an uppercut to Hee's chin, stunning him.

Traveler teleported in front of hee and prepared his Ultimate Light Fist
Collector dashed forward and prepared his Ultimate Fist of Creation.

When Hee got out of the stun, he saw two powerful fists flying towards his chest.

This attack, being a combination of two of the most powerful attacks, is conveniently called:
Ultimate Light Fist of Creation

In Hee's mind only these thoughts echoed: “I'm sorry father, but I have to do this. To protect everyone and you… I love you father.”

A single tear formed from Hee's eye, but it didn't even have time to drop.

Rays of light shot everywhere, a blinding light that outshined the entire galaxy.

And at the impact, an explosion, one million times more powerful than a supernova, shook the entire universe.

A beam of white and blue shot out from the planet.

The explosion blasted away, but the planet and the moons, and the star, weren't affected by the explosion.

When the beam of blue and white disappeared, Traveler and Collector stood next to each other, with their fists in front of Hee.

Erh, cameraman, turn around please, we want to see Hee. Thanks.

Hee stood there, with a gigantic hole in his chest, and he fell dead to the floor.
Weirdly, his blood was gold.

Traveler's aura disappeared, and so did Collector's.

Traveler: Guess she took them back
*Traveler fell on his butt on the floor, exhausted*

Collector: *while sitting down next to Traveler* Who's “She” anyway?

Traveler: Well the Primordial Goddess of the Earth, Gaia.

Collector: WHAT?!

Traveler: *smug* Yep

Collector and Traveler talk a bit, then Collector remembers about Astra, then the two go running to find her.

They find her fixing herself with a green energy around her
Traveler said that Gaia protected her from the blast.
Collector sighed and helped Astra up.

Traveler: Where's my Uncle?

Traveler looked around, and behind the ship, he found his uncle, covered in gold, i mean blood but the blood of Gods is golden.

But there was no time to cry.

Sure they made a funeral for his uncle on Ancient Terra, but after that they got on the ship and went back into the wormhole.

-Wormhole-
#Intermission#

Yep, Gaia can make mortals Immortal.

But if you truly wish to become immortal forever, you have to complete many quests.

#End of Intermission#

-Universe-
#Earth#

Traveler: Guess it's all over

Collector: Me and Astra will go back to our place. Your welcome to come

And like that, Traveler and Collector, and Astra, went into the Realm of Creation.

-End-
Credits
Dr.Evil-Ish - Collector
Dr.Evil-Ish - Astra
AustraliaMan - Traveler
AustraliaMan - Hee
AustraliaMan - Traveler's Uncle
Storyline - AustraliaMan

Special thanks to Dr.Evil-Ish and .Shiver. for critique and info, and special thanks to you, the reader.

I just got to the end.

It's pretty good, and the only issues I had were that some of the descriptions during intermissions were slightly inaccurate.

AAAAAAAA

Small thing about your summary of Astra:

She's not just an android, her entire body is made of nanotech. So maybe say "Astra is a sentient android with shapeshifting abilities who can fight rather well"

Sorry if it feels like I'm nitpicking

Dangggggg *applause*

Thank

Anything else to say?
I usually like to hear critique because a "nice" or "cool" isn't really a critique

A bit long but I really like it

Thank

Welp, now Traveler has unlocked his Awakened form, and he knows it works.

Basically Awakened Traveler is powerful enough to fight Base Form Collector.

Oke

Any opinions? On the story i mean

I’ve already said them

Ok, thank!

:D

Sadly Hee's dead now, so my most op oc now is Traveler again.

Welp time to introduce a new oc that will prob become my second main oc: Icarus

Oke

Woah, I love it!

Thank

Welcome

Second summary is pretty much accurate. She lets herself feel pain but she's far more resistant to it because ✨robot✨

Same with collector, but he decides not to become a god because he's already near unkillable, although currently he's learning otherwise

The spear thing though isn't really accurate. The only creation energy Astra has is to let her in and out of the realm of creation

Well still, any amount of Creation energy will turn any weapon into a dangerous one

Collector never gives enough to be used for offensive purposes.

Sorry if i got some things wrong

It's ok, the only stuff you got wrong was in the intermissions.

It was pretty close though

AAASA

This is amazing!

Yey

Should i post it or wait for Devilish to look at it

I think we should wait

Ok

Any critique?

I say it’s amazing

Thanks!

Nice

Can i post it now?

Sure

:D