Hehe, just some art of my bb (Felix Alex Grimm) <3

Niiiiiicccceee. I've always gotten reflections/texture wrong in my sketches. And you got proportions down. Reflections and shading and even texture! If This doesnt deserve an upvote idk what would

Haha, arigato <3 I know that shading and texturing can be really difficult to get down, but just keep practicing and studying the objects that you're trying to draw (that way, you can see how the object your drawing's texture and shading would naturally look, thus making it easier on yourself since you can learn how the shading and texture would normally look). Also, I *highly* recommend using Prisma Premier Colored Pencils, as they apply really nice, smooth blending, which, in turn, can really help the shading look better. That's the brand of colored pencils I used for this drawing, actually, which they work 102% better than Crayola, Cra-Z-Art, and any other brand I've ever used. The only thing about them is that they can be very costly, so I suggest getting a small pack first, just to try them out and see how much you like them yourself. If you want, I can send you the link to the specific ones I got, as I myself got a small pack to try out, and they still come with great use. Due to it also being a smaller pack, it's much cheaper than bigger packs, but still has plenty of useful colors! This specific set has 23 pencils in total, and, according to the site, is currently $24.83 (yeah, it's already a lot of money for such a small pack, which is why I recommend starting out with a smaller pack, as just imagine the price you'd pay for a bigger pack and not even ending up liking it). Also, thank you for your positive comment, I didn't know I needed one until now, haha <3 I actually finally just got myself out of a rough patch in my life, as some rough stuff went down for me recently, so it was nice to start off here again with such a nice comment. Have a nice rest of your day/night.
P.S. If you want/need anymore drawing tips or anything, feel free to contact me, and I'll do my best to give you helpful tips and whatnot.

Oh my Jesus that took forever to read XD, yeah I'm more of a graphite artist so I don't need to worry about all that jazz. I just Get an hb pencil and start drawing. I do make some colored peices but very rarely. And I also use the live reference technique which can be very useful in some situations. My whole thing was the jacket your character had. Making different reflective surfaces that close together? I know atleast 8 other people that would make that entire jacket almost white when making those kind of jackets. So seeing that you only added that detail to bits and peices shows a lot of thought and effort.

My apologies, I just tend to write a lot - I write whole books - so it kind of sticks with me even when I'm doing nothing more than commenting. Other than that, it's interesting to hear that you take pleasure in doing your artwork via graphite pencils, as those can be somewhat tricky to use (and the live reference technique can be very handy, though I recommend taking a photo beforehand, just in case the subject moves or the lighting changes, thus messing up the shadow). I did once make a whole graphite drawing myself, though I only did it for an art class project ( imgflip.com/i/541wku ). Either way, I actually find shading as one of the easiest things to do, especially in black and white. I don't know why, and I don't understand why others struggle so much with it, but I suppose there are some things in life we'll just never wholly understand, and that's okay <3 Besides, we all can't be perfect at everything. Anyways, thank you very much for seeing the effort I put into my art work, as I do try and show how much I care for art in the art itself. And, once again, if you ever do need help or art tips, I'm here, even if this is the site I'm on the least. Additionally, my character's name is 'Felix Alex Grimm', so you can just call him that. That or 'God', haha <3

Also, love the username <3

Ack I just blinded myself XD turned on light mode

Mood. Honestly, everything should be automatically set to dark mode, no matter where on the internet that may be. Light mode is just, like... instant blindness, and my eyes are bad enough as is, haha <3

Right???? Like bro I have it so I press a sertaon button on my mouse and it toggles something. Sometimes it's refresh page. Sometimes it's to see messages. No on imgflip, ya get blinded

Hmmm... Do you want me to send you a link to the Dark Reader Extension I have downloaded on my web browser? It works incredibly well and doesn't turn off when refreshing most pages (imgflip is one of the sites that does not turn off when refreshing the page).

Nah it's fine. Just gotta remember to turn that Setting off. I both hate and love it. Great for gaming since you can give it key binds as well to further improve your game. But also screw you in times like this 😄

Yeah, dark mode, as helpful as it can be, can also be a pain at times, unfortunately.

Well I'm thinking on going offline for a bit since I've been binging imgflip all day. But do you want to see an original character I'm working on for a book?

Wait, you write books too? Eyy, it's great to see somebody who is both an artist and writer, just like me! Either way, I'd love to <3 Do you want to hear some things about my original characters in return (I'd show you the ones from the book I'm currently writing, just let me know if you'd want spoilers or not)?

This is Finn Barrett. A 26 year old male. He is for my book "hopeless" about a test bomb that misfire and hit the beach of California and caused a 'zombie apocalypse' across the globe. (They aren't technically zombies but really damn close)

I love horror movies too! As for horror movies, I get ya there, as they don't really deliver the same scare factor as movies do. Yet, in the book I'm currently writing - which is a horror one - my friend said that they actually had to either stop reading it for a bit or actually felt a bit of pain whilst reading it due to how I ended up writing it. I don't blame them, as my book is extremely gory, and then even goes into great detail on the gore and whatnot. It's definitely not a book for those with a weak stomach, as I have even darker plans for the book as it goes. I honestly feel really bad for what I'm going to be putting my characters through in the story, but it's for the plot.

Oh? Lol what's it about? (I've watched all 3 IT's, Friday 13th, scream, a quiet place etc. I can handle gore so don't worry about going into detail If neccecary)

Also, Isabella is a guy, he's just named 'Isabella' because of his parents, as they always wanted a daughter, so when they got a son, they basically forced him into being a girl and abusing him for not being the way they wanted him to be. Here's what Isabella looks like (Just minus the bunny ears. I added them on accident, as the reference I was using to get his hair right had the bunny ears, and I accidentally ended up adding them on):

Haha. No worries. I've had to throw so many of my drawings (they weren't complete at all so don't get mad at me for throwing out art) because I followed the reference too closely

That sounds like a really interesting story! I see that we both might have an interest in horror books, hm?

I like Horror movies actually, I don't get the same feeling reading a horror book then I do a horror movie. But the're close enough. This book is meant to be more like twd and daybreak then an actual horror franchise.

Your brutal! Cutting off his own dad's fingers?? Yesh.

WTF BRO 😢 IM AN ANIMAL PERSON! luckily I'm more of a dog person then a cat person but what the f**k! He couldn't have just killed a homeless guy or something?? But your right you do add a lot of gore. Realistic gore. But gore. And im guessing that's through the entire storyline? (The amount of description for said parts) not going to lie that's a really good peice of writing. Are you publishing or is this just for fun?

Jesus christ that's one messed up child backstory. He has like 8 disorders! at the first 2 paragraphs I thought this was one of those cringey action cop movies you'd see on Netflix. This looks like something I'd genuenly read great job!

Although I'm a little confused. Why did he kill his first victim?

This looks so adorable, I love it! :D

Thank you very much!

This is one of my peices btw

Oh, wow, that's really realistic and well done! The eye proportion is perfect, reflection is something I'd expect to see when looking into an eye, and the whole shading of the iris may be something difficult to get right, but you just about nailed it, though you also nailed the rest of the shading, as even the eyelashes look stupendous. I also like the little details of white adding here and there, just to show that the eye is wet, as eyes are. Wonderful amounts of detail, you have a true talent with your art, never let it go to waste <3

Thanks man. (I use it as an overall term so please don't be confused if you are female) that took me overall 5 hours to complete over the span of 2 days so it took a lot of time. I used a Google image for reference but most of it was freehand. I used mainly 4b pencils to make them so I can get a lot of dark hues in there while keeping it quite light. Do you want me to show you one I made with colored pencils?

No, no, I am male, so please do not worry. And that's amazing! Drawing freehand can be pretty difficult, even when you have a reference, so I appreciate your dedication and skill when drawing. And, yes, of course <3

This is rust. My original character based off a book I read. I drew this with wax pencils

I've always had trouble with dragon mouths idk why

Ooooh, is that a Sandwing, from the Wings of Fire series? Either way, it's nicely done, though I suggest doing a few things in order to improve your coloring;
1. I can tell you kind of just moved your pencil up and down, up and down when coloring, but you should really be coloring in a circle-like motion, as it delivers a smoother texture then.
2. Find a shade that is slightly darker and another that is slightly lighter than the color you choose to be the overall color (say the "overall color" is the gold of the body scales for this specific example). With the darker-shade pencil, use it to color where the shadows would fall (the shadows, for this drawing, would most likely be right under each individual scale). Now, as for the lighter shade, you'd put this as to where the light source would be hitting your subject(s) (this depends as to where your light source is coming from, but let's say it's coming from directly above for now; You would apply the lighter color to the top of the head and down a bit of the back of the neck).
3. See the little lines on the neck that give it texture? You should use a shade darker than the rest of tr neck's color and color around each little line to give more of a shading texture. On the topic of shading specific areas, do you also see where the neck bends in a bit? The darker shading should go there as well, as the shadows would kind of... collapse in that area (I'm not sure as to how to exactly describe it, but I'm trying my best <3 ). Some other parts where darker shading could be used is right under the chin and right below the upper half of the mouth.
Other than that, I can't think of anything else that could be of use to you, as you have it down very well!

YES IT IS!! HAHA! litterally no one I show this picture to knows its from wings of fire! yeah I'm used to being able to just blend away the streak marks when drawing so I tend to be a little sloppy :[ I also kinda got bored of making this peice since I felt like I needed every detail to be perfect (cuz I based it off the cannon drawing in the "dragons of pyhria" at the frost of every book. So I didn't really care that there was not a lot of shading. Also I may sound really dumb rn but wax pencils are hard to shade with. Other than that I think there isn't much else to say except thanks for the tips!

*at the front of every book*

I've actually read the Wings of Fire series before, so that's probably the only reason I know it, haha. And, yeah, I get that it can be difficult to keep up with the circle hand motion, as it can easily get tiring, boring, or just plain difficult, which the exact same goes for shading, so don't stress about it too much. As for wax pencils, I never used them, so I can neither agree nor disagree with you and how difficult they are to use, sorry. And you're welcome, glad I could help <3

Yeah my whole this is that with graphite art, you don't fill the whole page with color. You shade the darkest parts then pull it across the rest of the drawing. So you can do up and down motions withought getting in shit for it XD.

Well, whatever works best for you. Besides, we all have our own unique styles, and there's nothing wrong with that (✿◡‿◡)

omg his hair looks like my oc max's hair and i love it

Well, here's a fun fact for ya:
Felix's hair design was actually a mistake. When I first drew Felix, the first thing I drew of him was his hair, but the thing was; I was actually trying to draw a completely different character. Yet, for the character I was actually *trying* to draw, I ended up doing their hair wrong. I wanted to fix it but, instead, embraced it and decided to make my own unique hair style from it. Thus, Felix's specific hair style was born. Actually pretty proud of it, as I love his hair too, haha <3
Anyways, arigato <3

kewl :3

Sorry dude but I am getting lost in all these, here mabye you could copy and paste all of those onto a new comment? Then replay to yourself in the order of the story? Because I can't keep track on what goes where and who does what to who...

Ah, sorry about that, I'll do that right away!

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"It all began with a single case, a single serial killer who didn't leave a trace...
The Night Killer; A disturbing case where all victims are brutally slaughtered, right in their own homes, in the dead of night. No one is safe, as the killer never leaves a shred of DNA, never shows their face - not even to a single camera...
This is a story for which there is no witness, but many victims; A crime as dark as a starless night...

After about an entire month, all with no luck of tracking down the cold-blooded killer known as 'The Night Killer', Police Felix Grimm, Benjamin Lepus, and Isabella Azul strive to get to the bottom of the crime, only for things to suddenly take a turn for the unexpected;
With no clues, no evidence, no motive, no suspect, the case suddenly gets even worse with a new, fresh twist - one that leads them right into the killer's trap... Then, into something much, much darker...

Welcome... to The Night Room..."

⬆ That's the book's description, but here's a more descriptive description, though this will contain spoilers, just so you know, but, basically:
Isabella Azul is secretly a psychotic murderer who just manages to blend in with society and get away clean with all of his crimes, as he's been killing ever since he was in High School, with his first victim being his High School best friend; Duncan. Yet, he didn't *directly* commit this murder. What I mean by that is that it was one of his alters who committed the murder (Isabella suffers from Dissociative Identity Disorder, along with multiple other mental disorders, including Schizophrenia, Bipolar One Disorder, Narcissistic Personality Disorder, PTSD, and Antisocial Personality Disorder. That should be them all, I don't think I missed any. He got all these disorders due to the trauma he suffered in his childhood, as his parents were extremely abusive towards him; His mother once tried to drown him when he was taking a bath, and she and his father almost killed him on multiple other occasions. Due to this, he often ended up in the hospital, thus meaning he had to retake a lot of years of school since he was in the hospital instead of school so much). Even though he does blame himself for Duncan's death anyway, he doesn't really feel any sympathy or empathy, which is something he's never really felt for anything. In turn, he begins to wonder if he truly can't feel *anything* at all.

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Anyway, he wanted to test out if he really wasn't capable of sympathy/empathy, so, one day, he went out to the shed that was outside his house. There, he picked out an axe before wandering over to the tree that Zia usually waited for him over at (Zia can't come inside, as Isabelle's father hates animals, so Zia would have been killed by him if she was ever found by him. After all, the rest of Zia's family was killed via rat poisoning that the father had fed the rest of her family. Zia was the only one to survive as a kitten, her siblings and mother dead. Isabella found her and took her under his wing from there), as Isabella would usually feed her at the time he went over. But, now, instead of a bowl of food, he had an axe. And there, beneath the tree, sat Zia.
Here's basically how it went from there:
Zia: "Meow." :3
Isabella: "..."
Zia: "Meow meow?" *wondering where food is*
Isabella: "..."
Zia: "... mew?"
Isabella: "..."
Zia: "..."
Isabella: "I'm sorry..." *raises axe and brings it down upon Zia's little skull*
Zia: "MEO-"
*blood splatters up onto Isabella, who is trying to see if he can feel any sort of sadness or anything, but he ends up feeling nothing, though he does feel something that makes him... smile at the sight of his beloved cat's brains showing as her blood slowly leaks out onto the ground in a lifeless lump of fur as he begins laughing*
I know that might seem really horrible, but it was Isabella trying to see if he would feel anything himself if he were to murder, as the first person he killed was actually done by Arctic (his alter that killed Duncan. The picture is of what Arctic looks like, just with amber eyes instead of blue ones, Also, there's a whole story behind Arctic's formation and why he looks the way he does, so if you want to hear about Arctic, just let me know), not himself. A while after that, his Schizophrenia is getting worse and Arctic is trying to get him to murder his parents, so, the night his mother nearly drowned him, he officially had enough. Wandering to the kitchen, he got out a knife. From there, he went to his parent's room and killed his mother via stabbing until dead (he didn't have to worry about his father, as his mother and father slept in different rooms since they hated each other, as his father basically constantly cheated on his mother with all the hookers he paid for).

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After that, he went to his father and knocked him unconscious with a baseball bat before taking him out to the shed and tying him up to the chair. Once his father wakes up, Isabella taunts him and slowly cuts him up with a knife, wanting to make him feel the pain he put Isabella through (his father is the one who put him through the thing that traumatized him most, as the drowning by his mother was only the second worst thing that happened to him, according to Isabelle. I won't say what his father did to him, as it's really, really messed up). Soon enough, his own father is crying and saying he's sorry, over and over again, but Isabella doesn't let him go that easily. Instead, he cuts of his father's fingers with his knife, one. By. One. Once finished, he just sits up on a table and watches his father writhe around in the pain Isabella's been feeling for years, which causes him to watch with a deranged, yet euphoric smile on his face. Once he's gotten enough satisfaction out of watching his father suffer, he finally kills him via slitting his throat. At this point, he's in a full psycho mode, his head twitching and mind in the darkest of places. Now, Isabella had a baby brother at the time, which in his psychotic state, he goes up to his crib and gets prepared to kill him as well. Yet, when he realizes what he's doing, he finally snaps out of it and realizes what he's doing. Then, he starts panicking; Not because he feels bad, but because he's afraid of getting caught. With that, he gets gasoline from out in the shed, pours it all over, lights a match, and then sets everything ablaze in order to burn all evidence. He then takes his baby brother and puts him on the doorstep on the orphanage before running off, now basically being homeless. Fortunately, he is, one day, approached by a good-looking business man who offers him a job as a model, as Isabella is highly attractive (he also has a more feminine figure since his mother often forced him to wear corsets to look more like a girl). Either way, he takes the job, but, in order to make more money faster, as he doesn't want to remain homeless, he secretly works as a prostitute (he murdered his parents and got the model job at age seventeen, then waited to become a prostitute at eighteen for legal reasons, of course. He also had experience at being a prostitute age seventeen already though, as when he went to purchase kitten food for Zia, he was short on money

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He was short on money due to his father constantly using it to buy out prostitutes, alcohol, and drugs. Speaking of drugs, Isabella was once addicted to heroin, as he found his father's heroin laying on the bathroom counter one day, so he decided to try it out, and he instantly fell in love with the high he got off of it. He soon became addicted and snuck as many heroin shots as he could, but, one day, his father caught him, thus resulting in him getting a beating; Not for using the drugs, but for using *his father's* drugs, as he didn't want to share, if that makes sense. Yet, Isabella managed to hack into his father's phone when his father was asleep, which he then got into contact with his father's drug dealer and made plans to meet up with him to get more heroin. In order to get his heroin without having the proper money, the drug dealer allowed Isabella to pay him in cooked meals (Isabella is an expert cook, as his parents forced him to learn how to cook since they never wanted to do it themselves). Yet, Isabelle did eventually quick, but only when he ended up almost dying of an overdose, as it was a big enough of a scare to make him quit. Back on track about his prostitution before, when he was nearly seventeen and getting food for his kitten, he only had a dollar, which was all he was able to steal from his father's wallet (he almost got more, but was caught in the act and, thus, beaten once again). Long story short, a seventeen-year-old approached him and was like;

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Random guy: "You're short on money?"
Isabella: "Yeah... I-I am, why?"
Random guy: "I think I know a way to help you out."
Isabella: "Y-You do?! I would love it if you could, I really need some food for my kitten..."
RG (Random guy): "Well, first off, how old are you?"
Isabella: "Well, um... I'm sixteen now... I'm going to be turning seventeen in about three days though. Why?"
RG: "Great, great..." :) "I'm seventeen too... So, how about I make your birthday a little... extra special, hm~? Here, on your birthday, meet me up at this place, at this time." *gives Isabella the location and time*
Isabella: "Huh? Y-You're really going to be giving me money for free...? I-I... That's really generous of you, sir, but... I-I don't know... I mean, yeah, I can go. My parents always let me do whatever I want on my birthday, as they don't want me even in the house so they can avoid me asking for gifts or anything..."
RG: "A hundred dollars... That's what I'll give you. But, no, not for free. It'll just be a... transaction. I get pleasure, you get money."
Isabella: "Y-You want me to... sleep with you?! Ew, no, th-that's disgusting! I don't even know you!"
RG: "A hundred dollars... You can either feed your cat practically forever, or let them starve. Your choice."
Isabella: ".... Fine..."
*goes on to do this for a while when eighteen as a model to keep making money for himself, though he soon quits when he finds himself with enough money to live a life he's finally okay with (Also, for some his clients as a prostitute, he earned extra money if one of them requested for him to kill somebody for them, so Isabelle was basically a hitman too. This gave him extra experience in killing).*
Now, that's basically the end of Isabella's backstory, as after he quits his modeling and prostitution, he gets a job as a mall security to have a better chance at being accepted into Police Academy, as he wanted to join Felix in the Police force since Isabella is in made love with him and wants to stick with him, no matter what. This is a reason behind his more random killings (not the ones where he was a hitman), as he'd kill them for two main reasons;
1. For Felix, thinking it might impress him, in some sick, twisted way, though he's so messed up that he honestly doesn't know it's bad.
2. Following 1., he also killed because he can really only see the bad in people due to his parents, as he feared everybody was secretly a bad person (he sees Felix as a good person though,

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which is due to his love for him). He also saw the good in Duncan for how kind he was to him, along with Duncan's sister, Mocha (he actually dated Mocha for a while, as Duncan informed that Felix had eyes on Benjamin Lepus, so it would probably be better for Isabella to like somebody else in the meantime (Isabella fell in love with Felix basically at first sight, which was in High school in the cafeteria, as Felix is pretty strong, noble, and such things, making Isabella feel as though Felix could protect him from his parents and, maybe even bring him to a paradise where everything would be better for him, instead of full of fear, constant pain, and silent suffering. In short, Isabella dreamed of the day whereas Felix would run off with him, though it never occurred) Isabella was really happy with Mocha, but, one day, a fight broke out, Arctic got involved, and it ended up in Isabella accidentally pushing Mocha into hanging herself (Duncan died before Mocha, just so you know). Also, Duncan and Mocha's father was a therapist, who helped Isabella figure out what mental disorders he had, as taking Isabella to a mental hospital was out of the question due to how his parents were. Also, due to this, Duncan and Mocha's father was able to get Isabella some meds to better fair with his mental disorders, like Schizophrenia. Anyways, I think that's fully it for Isabella's backstory. After he gets through Police Academy, he's then on the team, all while secretly crushing on and stalking Felix (he often stalked him with camera in hand, taking secret photos of him to obsess over). Anyways, later on in the story, Benjamin is kidnapped overnight, and when Felix wakes up alone (he sleeps with Benjamin since he and Ben are married, as Felix is homosexual, Benjamin is bisexual, and Isabella is pansexual and autosexual), he doesn't think much of it because, who knows, Ben may have just been out shopping. Later on, he then receives a phone call from Benjamin, and when he picks up, he hears Benjamin tell him about how he woke up in a dark basement arranged to be something like a maze, which Felix does his best to calm Benjamin down, but, eventually, Isabella is murdered by Isabella via being stabbing in the abdomen, having the knife dragged up to his collarbone, and then being stabbed before having his throat slit and heart carved out of his chest. Yet, Felix doesn't know Isabella did it, so, later on,

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, he gives Isabella a call and asks if he can stay over at his place. Isabella obliges and happily invites Felix over, which Felix has never been over to Isabella's and is quite shocked to find Isabella living in a whole mansion that is absolutely gorgeous (a whole fountain out in the yard, mugs made out of things like pure ruby and emerald, etc.). Anyways, he goes inside, Isabella makes tea for them, and eventually leads Felix to bed. When he goes to sleep, he has a nightmare about a horrific monster as a result of seeing the horribly mutilated corpses of The Night Killer's (Isabella's) victims. Due to that, he gets up and decides to take a walk, only to find Isabella up as well, picking up some papers. Felix makes himself known, and Isabella seems scared to see Felix up so late at night, so, after Isabella leaves with the papers, Felix goes over and investigates, only to find that these "papers" are actually photos of him - photos similar to the ones Benjamin said he found down in the basement, as it seemed as though somebody was stalking him and taking pictures (Ben was right, of course). Anyways, Felix turns around, ready to nope the Hell out of there, but, alas, Isabella is standing behind him with a bat, which he then knocks Felix unconscious before also taking him down to the basement and tying him up to a chair. Once Felix wakes up, Isabella sweetly talk to him, giving him the choices of either;
-Staying with Isabella and forgetting that any of the horrific things ever happened.
-Letting Felix try and escape the maze for himself, though, if he is caught by Isabelle, he will be killed, unless he escapes, in which he's allowed to go free and do whatever he pleases.
-Be killed right then and there.
Felix chooses the latter, and though Isabella tries to get Felix to stay with him, he soon gets the message after Felix snaps at him a bit. Yet, Isabella murders him in a non-violent way - simply injecting him with some lethal drugs before going over to a table and stabbing himself in the throat, unable to live without his beloved Felix.
From there, Felix finds himself waking up, even after dying, and that's when he finds that he's not in the real world anymore, but, rather, in a dark, colorless world where the night sky is blood red... He, Benjamin, and Isabella must uncover the secrets to this world and escape it, or else perish in this strange world that is riddled with monsters and some strange, black fog...
And that, my friend, is The Night Room.

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The Night Room is specifically what Isabella calls his basement - after his criminal name 'The Night Killer'. If you want to know the whole rest of the story, I can tell you that too. Otherwise, if you'd like to read what I have so far for yourself, here ya go <3:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/268110475-the-night-room-a-king-of-hearts-fan-fiction
Also, Isabella's story isn't going to be spoken about until way later in the book, so knowing it all already might ruin it a bit for you.
P.S. There are about 3-4 chapters that I did not edit at all, so expect a few mistakes in a few chapters, though there might be some minor ones all throughout.
Anyways, if you have any questions, feel free to ask! Other than that, I'll go to responding to all you told me now that I finally got that all down.

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Jesus christ that's one messed up child backstory. He has like 8 disorders! at the first 2 paragraphs I thought this was one of those cringey action cop movies you'd see on Netflix. This looks like something I'd genuenly read great job!

I know, it's really messed up, and I do feel bad, but it's very important for his character. Besides, due to his abusive family, he ended up having a very snobby, arrogant, self-centered personality, as he's afraid to let his guard down in fear of being hurt ever again. This honestly makes him a really unique character, as most Rulandians (what you call someone from 'Rulands', which is the country he, Felix, Benjamin, and all other The Night Room characters are from) are really sweet and caring, so Isabella really stands out, which is something I personally love about him and his character. And thank you, I'm glad you think that <3

Although I'm a little confused. Why did he kill his first victim?

Isabella was very open to Duncan about his abusive family, so, one day, Duncan had enough of Isabella not standing up for himself, so he told Isabella to meet him out at a building at midnight (Duncan is a bit of a 'I belong to the streets' kid, in a sense that he likes to sneak out at night and wander the streets. Isabella did this too, as his parents wouldn't let him out of the house for anything, save for school, causing Isabella to sneak out at night to go meet Mocha and do whatever). Anyways, he does as Duncan says, and Duncan tries to get Isabella in the mood for fighting, so he begins taunting Isabelle about all the horrible things he's been through, saying things like;
"You can't even stand up for yourself; This is why your parents abuse you!"
And such. And though he had no ill-intentions, it was enough to cause Arctic to front and just snap, thus resulting in Arctic murdering Duncan via stabbing. Also, Duncan did not immediately die, but rather died about fifteen minutes after Isabelle left, his body being found the following morning (Isabella wasn't caught since he destroyed all evidence that could link him the crime).

I just scrolled up to remember that this entire character background happened. Over a drawing...

Additional Info about the characters:
In the current time of the story, Felix is 22 years old. Benjamin is 21 years old. Isabella is 26 years old.

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WTF BRO 😢 IM AN ANIMAL PERSON! luckily I'm more of a dog person then a cat person but what the f**k! He couldn't have just killed a homeless guy or something?? But your right you do add a lot of gore. Realistic gore. But gore. And im guessing that's through the entire storyline? (The amount of description for said parts) not going to lie that's a really good peice of writing. Are you publishing or is this just for fun?

I wanted it to specifically be a cat to get that exact kind of reaction from a reader, as people seem to be more emotional over animal death compared to people's, so that's why I chose to have Zia be killed instead of a human. And, yes, gore is present throughout a Hell of a lot of the book. I'm currently editing a chapter right now whereas Felix gets his hand stabbed, which, before said chapter, Isabella gouged his own eye out with a scalpel. There's also descriptions of what some of Isabella's murders victims looked like, such as heads squashed to look like a slushed watermelon, decapitated bodies, hearts skillfully removed from the corpse, etc.. Also, it's being published on a free online site, so I guess it's just for fun, though I honestly wish I could get paid for it.

Your brutal! Cutting off his own dad's fingers?? Yesh.

Yep, exactly.

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Also, here's what Felix and Ben look like (redhead is Felix, the one with the purple hair is Benjamin, though Ben's hair goes down to his shoulder's, not to the back of his neck. His skin is also a creamy tan color, not pure white. Also, sorry for all the pictures of Felix, I have so many pics of him, as I am what my username says I am :P ):

I'm also going to delete the other ones since these are in much better order, hope you don't mind and that this helped <3

I'm sorry, I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you mean by that.

Oh nothing bad. But I completley forgot that this while conversation happened because I liked your drawing of the red head

That's on me lol. Shouldn't have added the dot dot dot :|

Oh, haha, yeah. It's fine with me though, as I really enjoy being able to share my best book yet with others <3

Yeah its really good. You should try to publish it (not in stores or something, that's a little much for a little story) and get it out to the world. It's really good and I know for a fact that I'd read it

How did you finish reading it already- Wattpad says it would take approximately 13 hours and sixteen minutes to read 😳 Either way, it's nowhere near finished, as I still have a *lot* to add. I'm a little less than halfway done, I'd say.

Oh no I didn't read the actual book I read what you texted here XD

BTW I have an Idea for a kill... idk how you would implement it into the story but mabye Isabella could use a sanding belt on someone? The pain they would go through would be livid

Idk what word would work for the amount of pain they would go through so I used a word that does not work in that context :P

But just the thought of her going to a workshop and using an electric sander just makes me shudder. I don't know where you want to take your story but I think it would be a unique kill

*him

But, yeah, I think that's a really interesting killing method! I'll do some research on how it could exactly work, where he'd kill the target, and so on and so forth. Besides, at one point in the book, I want Isabella to open about his past, which means opening about his time as prostitute, which, henceforth, means he also has to open up about being a hitman too. Thus, I want to include him speaking of some ways he killed his targets, which were nothing like the normal (simply poisoning somebody's drinks or shooting them). Besides, Isabella is practically a sadist, and with no feelings of sympathy/empathy for all (save for Felix, Duncan, and Mocha), he finds it easy to brutally slaughter people. After all, he fits right into society and can actually be extremely charming, so it's kind of hard for a person to resist when he asks for them to follow him (he got a job as a model, even when homeless, so that should tell you everything, haha). Oh, also, this is what Isabella would (roughly) look like if he were the Sebastian version of himself:

Haha, I get that it can be hard to remember that he's a male due to his name, but, if you'd like, you're free to call him 'Sebastian' instead. If his parents weren't the people they are and actually would have just given him a male name and a good life, I would have named him 'Sebastian' anyway. Thus, he'd look completely different, as he wouldn't wear makeup nor blue hair dye (the only reason he actually wears those things is because:
-His mother always told him that he looked ugly with a combo of white hair and green eyes, so she forced him to dye his hair blue.
-He was forced to put on makeup to appear more like a girl. On that note, he was often forced to wear dresses as well, which was really embarrassing to him. Luckily, before school, Duncan always packed some normal clothes for Isabella every day, just so Isabella could slip into them and feel more comfortable. Isabella was allowed to keep these clothes and snuck them into school every day, where he would change into them in the school bathroom before changing back to the clothes his parents wanted to wear at the end of the day, as if his parents saw him in/found his normal clothes Duncan gave him, Isabella surely would have been beaten for that).

Oooh, I love that idea! Another idea I have is that, one day, he went out to do a job as a hitman for one of his prostitute clients, which he found his target out a train station. Because of this and his quick-thinking, dark mind, he knew *just* what to do. With that, he sweet talked the target into following him to a spot where nobody else was standing, and then just spoke with them to pass the time. Now, where they were specifically standing was in front of the tracks of a bullet train, so when Isabella heard the train coming in, he quickly shoved the person out into the tracks. This is how this would go;
Train: *ugh, train sounds*
Isabella: *small twitch (he twitches a bit when in his psychotic state, which, the more he twitches, the more crazy he's feeling. Also, when Arctic is fronted, he twitches a lot since he's almost completely crazy)*
Target: "Yeah, I get what you're saying there, haha! I know it's confusing, but- W-Wait... H-Hey! Wh-WHAT ARE YOU DOING, STOP!"
Isabella: *suddenly shoves person out onto the train tracks with full force, just as the train is coming into view*
Target: *can't even get a word out before the bullet train collides with them, instantly basically shredding them apart due to its high speeds, as their limbs simply fly off from the impact, organs and blood splatter everywhere, though the train just keeps plowing them forward, now smothered in crimson red and guts*
Isabella: *gets some of the blood splatter onto him, though he doesn't seem to care. Rather, he just twitches some more and smiles, standing there, completely still, as he looks at the horrific mess he's made of amputated limbs and organs that are laid about like ornaments on a Christmas tree*
It doesn't take long for people to see the sight, so the Police are called. From there, Isabella just acts frightened and says that the target simply walked out onto the tracks, probably as way to commit die. He is end up being believed and gets away with the murder.

Yeah you put a gruesome thought in my mind haha. But go to YouTube and search 'sanding an orange with a sanding belt. And picture that video with someone's head

Haha, sorry <3 I just love writing gore, it seems to be what I'm best at. Anyways, I'll definitely do that when I can, though I'm pretty busy today!

Mabye for the sand belt he goes after some kind of carpenter (say it's because he was hired as a hitman or something) he goes to a small shop with a blueprint and asks for it to be made of wood. The carpenter accepts and says it is roughly 40 to 50 dollars US. Isabella asks for it to be smoothed (referring to the sand belt removing any harsh edges the wood may have) the carpenter accepts once again and ups the fee to 55 dollars US. Just as the carpenter is almost done sanding Isabella takes the peice of wood and knocks the carpenter out, brings him inside and dumps water on his head. (For torture reasons let's say this carpenter absolutely loves their hair and would beat the shit out of anyone who cut it) he takes the ban saw (the saw with a very thin blade that goes up and down really fast) and cuts the man's hair off. Very close to the scalp. Then takes him over the the sand belt and shoves the caprenters ear into it. Carpenter cries in agony for quite some time as Isabella slowly files down the carpenters ear. When there is nothing but ear canal remaining he forces the carpenter face forward and rams his head into the 80 grit sand paper.. slowly eating away at his face till the screams of pain turn into a red pulp infront of Isabella's eyes

Hehehehe... I love it <3 Also, you don't have to say 'US' dollars, as all the characters in this book are from Rulands, so US money doesn't really mean anything to them. Other than that, I'll definitely include it in the book when the time comes! Thanks a bunch <3

NEW IDEA FOR A NEEDLESSLY BRUTAL KILL FOR YOUR BOOK: say Isabella takes a huntsman... mission? (Is that what its called? I dunno) to kill a male skateboarder who has done someone very wrong. (Stole money or something. I am only thinking about the kill so backstory up to you) so Isabella dresses as a boarder. Slightly ripped jeans. Skate shoes, helmet and a beat up skateboard. Then goes to the skatepark that the subject goes to most. Asks to borrow a block of wax from another skater and heads to a rail leading to an odd ramp. He goes over and heavily waxes the end of the rail and ramp. Isabella chose a seemingly deserted area so there couldn't be very many people to use the skate trap. 20 minutes go bye and he sees the victim. Isabella walks over to him and asks if he could to a kick flip 180 off of the rail. (Kickflip 180's are almost impossible to do on even a Slightly waxed rail) he is weary, asking when the last time it's been waxed. Where Isabella wants him to end the grind etc. He answers the victims questions and he goes to do the trick... he slips on the wax. His skateboard seems to pick up so much speed that his shoes fall off (they were very untied that when he walked they looked like flip flops) victim falls back and Isabella smiles when he sees the victim's skull *c r a c k*. Blood seeps down from the boys thick helmet hair (your hair gets messy when you wear that kind of helmat) the body sluggishly falls off the steel bar. His head remaining in place as the bar is inside his skull.

Although. This time there were a lot of people witnessed. And one person remembers Isabella waxing the rail. So Isabella is taken to the police. Dunno where to take this now so it's up to you :|

Oh, haha, my bad- But, yeah, the book is a lot longer than what I told you. Besides, all I told you was Isabella whole backstory and just a sliver of the whole book's plot, haha <3

Yeah no problem. Just to give you some inspiration for how to describe it if needed. Cuz it's both satisfying to see the orange just melt into the sandpaper. But you put a living human in that same thing and it's just like oh shit that could actually happen...

Thus is the video I was talking about

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=QA67OJ2EEmw

Hehe, I should have fun writing about that then <3