If you don't understand the level of craziness that is going on, then wake up!

Dang!

>:)

That’s so dumb! That logic is trash!

Yes, such trash!

Youre back?

Yes!

Well, welcome back. I dunno if you remember me, but Im Borderline_Psychotic

I very much remember you, why did you leave?

Family found my account and made me delete. Why did you leave?

I couldn't control the amount of time I was on imgflip...It started to ruin my life, and I could not pursue my dreams...I now have things under control!

So you think youre good enough to return?

Yes, like I said before.

Good for you, in that case.

:)

Are you not?

What do you mean?

You could, but just doing these things will magnify every type of writing and thought process you'll ever have...Think about it, if you can speak or write about a more conscious and unconscious state of your mind, then you' de become a master!

To be honest, if what Im doing isnt very important, I kinda think of it as a book.

I reached for another dish and scrubbed it clean before putting it down to the other side of the sink. I watched some suds fall down and drip down the drain as I reached for another dish to wash.

Are you feeling stuck, almost in syrup because Youtube or Facebook/Media has glued you? I felt like that before and sometimes do...It is a weird feeling, almost like Demons are holding me in place; so I'll shut down my computer and go do something else.

No. Sometimes I do feel that way, but when that happens I always take a break. I dont feel like Im glued to Imgflip, if thats what youre asking.

Well, that's perfect! Keep doing that, but each time add more and more and more mental and maybe physical detail.

I think Im on a good track. You want an excerpt from a book Im writing?

Okay, that is good. Are you glued to any other things (Youtube, etc)?

Nah, Img is the only thing I use to be honest. I do write a lot though.

Good! Writing is very good! Try writing down what you see, and how you feel when you see (anything). Try also to write down your thoughts and dreams...These are very good exercises.

You mean like a diary?

Yes.

“Charon? Charrrooonnn…” a voice said, slowly dragging me out of sleep. “Hey, don’t you know what today is?” they said, shaking my shoulder a bit. I rolled over, “Hrmm…?” I said, reaching over and grabbing my glasses. “Aliza? That’s you right?” I yawned. “What’s up?”

She laughed and grabbed me into a hug. “Happy birthday!” she said, holding out a plate to me. It had a small cake with a candle in it, making me sit up. “Woah, hey, it’s today?!” I said, looking at it.

She laughed, “How is it that you do this to me on my birthday every year, but every time I do it, you don’t know what day it is?”

I shrug, “I don’t know, I guess your birthday is the only day I remember.” I said, taking the plate, and blowing out the candle. And biting into the cake. “Mm, this is good!” I say, wiping some crumbs of my face.

Aliza smiled, “Aw, thanks. I’m learning how to bake in Sycheth, that’s the first one I made on my own.” I take another bite. “You made this?! It’s way too good!” I say, while she laughs, “Thanks Char.”

That's good. Are you open to a few details?

Of couse!

>:)

Two things...One: The generic "crumbs from a cake" stereotype catches my eye...It is more of a preference issue, but it is something you see in almost all books that mention eating.

Two: Another stereotype I see is the second person borderline...Where things seem to be about where "second person omniscient" is...Of course, there isn't really a second person omniscient, but your writing seems to border that...Again, this is just preference, but your readers might think the same.

:)

Hmmm so what should I put instead?

How should I fix it?

Think of ways to change crumbs...Use a different descriptor for it.

Hmmmmmm....
how about

'I say, wiping some streaks of frosting and bread that were left behind'

Hmmm. That is a little strange...Someone may be thinking: "...and bread that were left behind." What? Left behind? You could replace crumbs with frosting.

Alright, thank you!

>:)

us boys need to tell her to STFU

Maybe, or just rethink what she said

a man that is gay can do what a girl can

I see what you mean. Lol...Thankfully that's not true! :)

it is true then how can gay men wear makeup , walk like a women, wear dresses and pd put on heels

ill tell u why

cause i have seen it all

Any man or woman can do that...You don't have to pretend to be the other sex by labeling yourself like that...Being "gay" doesn't give you powers...You don't turn into the opposite sex.

bruh it's true

I understand your joke, but "being gay" doesn't change you.

But can a man give birth though

Here is the thing...Some of what she said is true, but what she says after commits suicide...Listen: "Do you think a woman can do anything that a man can do?"
"Yeah sure."
"Do you think a man can do anything a woman can do?"
"No."

While men cannot give birth, woman cannot make a baby without sperm...By her statement, she thinks that a woman can do anything that a man can do, but a man cannot do anything that a woman can do...Do you see it? As soon as she says this, her statement is rendered false, and (metaphorically) commits suicide.

I will make it even more simple: A woman can do anything that a man can do, which means that a man would have to be at some sort of standard...But if a man cannot do anything that a woman can do, that standard goes caput. It just doesn't make sense. Because, on one end, there is a bar that has to be met, but when the woman says the second thing, that bar that she created for both sexes is shattered.

ill give u that

>:)

lol

:)