Based on the sentence: There must be more money, there must be more money. It was penned by Lawrence. Note the profound lack of a semicolon. I was unaware that 2 independent clauses had ever been written by a major author. It is like a punch to the gut that the editor was seemingly asleep. By that I mean, what reason could there be to favor the comma usage. The undermining of the English language. So their having been so bold this stream hopes to whole heartedly support the daring. USE TEMPLATE!