It's like 10 chapters rn and kinda long but i need suggestions

I WANT TO READ PLS

Okok gimme a bit it's too long for google docs

any file is fine

Alright

https://1drv.ms/w/c/14672d20826b017c/IQDPVGr4OupMQ78UDYHlLAxiATVdTYnxbuODRZ0a0cyIdnc?e=4yicM8

i need something to read so gimme gimme

One sec I'm trying

To find how to get it to work

give me commentator statues and I'll read it

Okok wait lemme copy it all into a doc rq cuz I'm using Samsung notes rn

alr

It's too long for google docs, what can I do 🥹

I put it in Microsoft Word! If you have suggestions just mc me or reply with the suggestions

https://1drv.ms/w/c/14672d20826b017c/IQDPVGr4OupMQ78UDYHlLAxiATVdTYnxbuODRZ0a0cyIdnc?e=4yicM8

LGBTQ representation

I wanna keep LGBTQ stuff not direct, maybe with hints or references but not directly someone being queer

oh ok

If u wanna read what I have..

https://1drv.ms/w/c/14672d20826b017c/IQDPVGr4OupMQ78UDYHlLAxiATVdTYnxbuODRZ0a0cyIdnc?e=4yicM8

is it finished already?

No, it's gonna be much longer, hopefully.

ah

Yea, I'll probably post about it a lot so if you don't wanna read it yet that's fine

okay

(Or ever, idrk)

Goosebumps: Welcome to Dead House 😭

HELP am I copying another book...

Mine is probably (hopefully) different 🥹

family moves to a small town, turns put its population is just entirely a cult (of ghosts)

Ooh imma have to read that

Mine is about a family moving in to a listed house at a reasonable price for the rich-looking neighborhood, but it's a cult that slowly eases them in without them realizing they're in a cult. Everyone is devoted to this one guy who came into the neighborhood first, but this 13-year-old boy, the son of the lady who just moved in, starts noticing weird behaviors and stuff. Along with him, a 16-year-old girl who knows the truth and hates it meets him. There's a big old storyline and whatnot but I'm enjoying writing it ^^

everything you said apart from character ages applies to Welcome to Dead House 😭

It's okay they're probably just similar concepts with different stories

it’s not technically a cult in the book i’m talking about it’s just a group of undead but it’s effectively a cult

Oh ok

I'm not planning to exactly directly say they're a cult in the book, but it's obvious they are, it's just up to the reader to realize.

also lowk i’d read ts even if it sounds uncannily similar to another book

Tyty imma post it when I'm finished :3

make a Boeing B-17 "Flying Fortress" nuke their city like Hiroshima and Nagasaki but 5 times stronger

No 🥹

make a Lockheed Martin F-22 "Raptor" fire an AIM9-M AAM Infrared air to air missile at a random character