I like the story thus far, but I do not think that 12pt Arial White Text is the right formatting. If you want to change the color of a page, go to file -> page setup -> page color. I'd either recommend a handwritten font with page breaks if you're aiming for a journal look. If you are aiming for notes taken on Google Docs then it's acceptable, just do a page break after the title or some other separation between the Title and Entry 01 to truly immerse me.
Overall, I think that this is really good! I put in some edits that I think could help improve pacing a little more, plus some other spelling corrections - but I think that this is PEAK!
9/10, making an Eyeless Jack card rn
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