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I thought that my comment was engagement bait, so I deleted it. Nothing more and nothing less.
But yes I also had the same gripes about Angel Dust. Vivzie actually showed a beta design that "fixed" all of your gripes but removed all of the good stuff about Angel. (not to be confused with Angel, a class of Heavenpeople, which have pretty FINE designs)
And, also, I'd decontextualize some of the ways that the characters have died, and have their designs reflect that. Backronym it. Alastor is a radio demon and a deer sinner. Maybe have his death be that he was crushed/impaled by a broken radio tower after he hunted some deer which were big no-nos. Sir Pentious is a Victorian-Era Snake. Maybe push his death date to somewhere around WWI, and maybe make his death a snake related one, maybe a series of event where he died after a female snake bit him in his airship, causing it to crash, giving Pentious a heart attack and killing him. This absolutely convoluted death could also improve his role as a comedy character, if that is what we're aiming for with Pentious.
Enough Yap (unless you would like me to continue)