I made this yesterday.

badnlba

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baldnab

Ah

bleef snarf

fl studio for brokies

idk know what that even is lol.

fl studio is what bigger musicians often use besides actual instruments but it isn't free

I/m a broke ass bitch and mt budget is $0.00

https://www.bandlab.com/track/84966061-e104-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6?revId=83966061-e104-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6

I'd like to criticize it but it's more of a help get better than an insult/attack

Go ahead.

the sounds are good but dont go so well when they're playing all together and the drums aren't really it
tho I do see that potential in you

Yeah after listening to it around 100 times i kinda realized i could have done better with the beats.
(I teach myself and don't look at tutorials)

must watch music theory for beginners videos on yt they'll help a lot

ah okay.

would you like to check out 2 lofi beats i made? I'd like to hear your opinion
https://voca.ro/1cESqUdAN4kf
https://voca.ro/1meE9pJF1glj

Listened to most of the both of them, out of all they are both really good but if i had to choose i would go for link one.

thanks for the appreciation. they took 2 to 3 weeks to make (I composed the melodies in my head at school)