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I was just camping in the woods with my family for a few weeks, but the plan changed completely on the first night. We had decided to try hunting for some of our food supply, but dear f**king god that was the worst mistake of my life. After Everone was already half asleep in their tents, I went outside to take a piss in the trees real fast, but when I went out of the tent flap there was this thin, bony deer outside the kid's tent, just staring at it. Like it was waiting for them. I slowly went back into my tent without it seeing me, but about 5 minutes later, I heard a tearing sound and a horrible scream that was cut off abruptly with a sound like snapping twigs. Or... bones. I ran out to see that f**king deer standing over the kids broken bodies with blood and gore dripping from its mouth. The instant I stepped out of the tent flap, its head snapped towards me with this oversized almost HUMAN smile that was stained deep red. And then, hen the f**king thing stood up. It stood there, staring and smiling with its head cocked to one side for a couple of seconds. Then it screamed a horrible, bloodcurdling screech and rushed me. That was the last thing I ever saw before my heart was ripped from my flesh.
