Did the girl get an axe in the head?
If not, bad story.

no she didnt....why should she

Considering you only make self inserts I would want an axe in your head.
Also the dude is running a perfectly normal business and if a girl is living in a forest she clearly needs a better home.

normal business? he was clearing a forest

Which is normal and isn’t even done by rich people sometimes dumbass

still bad

No it’s not

how is it not bad to clear a forest? mf what do you want this earth to look like

My guy, we have plenty of wood and tree farms dumbass.

why should he clear the forest she is trying to protect

Because she is not important

why is she not important

Cause she’s your self insert and your life is less important that a fly’s.

shes not really a self insert

theres more to it lol.

the guy basically kidnaps people to do it for him by "taking them on vacation" and telling them to clear the forest.

then one guy that he took ended up getting lost and finding the girl. she told him about how the guy wanted to destroy it.

And then they die.
A tree lands on them and nothing of value was lost.

thats not how it went

It is now watch me go copyright it.

DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT

why do you think the story should go like that

Cause it should.

be specific

You first

Boringghg

theres more to it lol.

the guy basically kidnaps people to do it for him by "taking them on vacation" and telling them to clear the forst.

then one guy he took got lost and found the girl. she told him about it.

BOOOO!

Nobody cares about your dumbass self-insert.

it is not one

Atleast the guy is running a successful business.

Also, how is stopping him going to mean anything, there's thousands like him who are making good money and helping build more houses so homeless people don't have to starve on the streets.

Antagonize him all you want, but there's no f**king way a man running a logging company is using slave labor and hasn't been shut down and arrested yet.