Nice! I will say that the colored-in one is just a bit off. The torso is pretty small length-wise compared to the limbs. I know that sounds weird since that usually is the case, but think about what you need to be able to fit in that stomach/ abdomen area. Ribs, digestive system, etc. I think the main issues with the pose are the lack of neck, leg length, and hand size. However, if this is your art style you absolutely should go for it, and these are just suggestions from someone who has struggled with poses for a while. Your art is really good!
