Chapter 4 part 1: The beginning of the end (GvP)

Phantom and the Hunter watch as the army of angels and Inklas run at each other.

"Aw shit we're too late" Phantom said

"No this is perfect" The hunter said

"How!?!" Phantom questioned

"We wait for after the battle where everyone is tired and we take the unholy queen" The hunter said

"But there is tons of soldiers there" Phantom said

"The aftermath of the battle is when we strike" The Hunter said

"Got it!" Phantom said

"We will have to be quiet which means we cannot engage them" The hunter said

"Alright" Phantom said

The Hunter and Phantom watched the battle.

Xander put Kinyani's sword, planet in his piggy bank full of weapons. Xander quickly got back to cutting angels down. Xander looks towards Kinyani and sees she is clearing crowds of Angels without any problem.

"Kin!" Xander yelled

"Yes Xander!" Kinyani said

"I'd like that back after this" Xander said

"Got it!" Kinyani said

At the same time, Inkmatas was blasting angels left and right with her magic, Inkmatas keeps blasting them so they get knocked out instead of killed. Inkmatas keeps blasting angels while advancing, the angels against Inkmatas quickly realize that she is a goddess and they start to retreat. Peyton kicks Gabriel in the chest, Gabriel quickly grabs Peyton's kick, and smiles at Peyton.

"Peyton, you should know when to give up" Gabriel said

"Oh I gave up on a lot of things but I never give up on family!" Peyton said

"How unfortunate" Gabriel said

Gabriel threw Peyton to the ground when Gabriel was suddenly blasted in the back by some magic.

"Gah!" Gabriel yelped as he looked behind him.

Inkmatas stared Gabriel dead in the eyes. Gabriel stared back at Inkmatas.

"Well well well" Gabriel said

"Tell me, why exactly do you think you can get away with hurting my family" Inkmatas said

"Because your family is evil" Gabriel said

"Evil is a point of view" Inkmatas said

"Aren't you being a wise guy!" Gabriel said

"It's just the truth" Inkmatas said

"The truth is an concept made by society to try to be right!" Gabriel countered

"Man you are really dumb" Inkmatas said

Gabriel, enraged, came after Inkmatas and swung his angelic sword over his head at Inkmatas. Inkmatas quickly caught the angelic sword with her magic.

"WHAT!?!" Gabriel shouted in suprise. Peyton quickly got back up and struck Gabriel in the back with her unholy hellblast.

"GAH!" Gabriel yelled

Meanwhile, Mirai and Raphael were still fighting.

"Mirai listen to me, you are fighting on the wrong side!" Raphael says

"And how am I supposed to know that!" Mirai says

"We could've stopped this conflict if you just handed Peyton over" Raphael says

"THEN YOU WOULD'VE KILLED HER!" Mirai yells

"NO WE WOULDN'T WE WOULD MAKE HER BETTER!" Raphael yells back

"THEN PROVE IT!" Mirai yells

"We would need our lord and savior for that" Raphael says

"Religion is just mind control!" Mirai says

"Religion helps those with PTSD!" Raphael yells

"Well Religion never helped with my abusive parents!" Mirai yells

Mirai swings the Kura Tamashi over her head, Raphael quickly blocks the strike and kicks Mirai to the ground. Raphael holds Mirai's hand that has the sword down and touches her forehead with his open hand. Raphael starts to look into Mirai's past.

"STUPID GIRL!" A man shouts as he has a belt in his hand

"DAD WAIT PLEASE NO!!!" Child Mirai shouts

Mirai's dad started to beat Child Mirai with the belt, a day later Child Mirai tried sneaking to church and praying for the lord to fix her problems but one day.

"MIRAI TEKINA GET BACK HERE YOU DAMN GIRL!!!" Mirai's dad shouted as he entered the church angrily.

"N-NO PLEASE, SOMEONE HELP!!!" Child Mirai yells as she tries to get away.

Several priests look at Mirai's dad chasing Mirai, an figure in the church got up and looked at Mirai's dad.

"HEY, GET AWAY FROM HER, YOU CLEARLY ARE AN HORRIBLE EXAMPLE OF AN FATHER FOR THIS WONDERFUL CHILD!" The figure said

The father looked at the figure angrily and reached for his side. The father pulled out an gun and shot the figure. Child Mirai saw the figure falls to the ground and cried.

"YOU ARE NEVER GOING TO THIS HELL OF A PLACE EVER AGAIN!" Mirai's dad yelled

Child Mirai quickly found a place to hide and hid. The father looked around the church and suddenly found Mirai. He took her back home where he beat Mirai until she bleed.

"YOU ARE A HORRIBLE CHILD, YOU WOULD'VE BEEN BETTER AS A BOY!" The father yelled.

Raphael quickly took his hand off of Mirai's forehead not wanting to see anymore, Raphael got off of Mirai and stepped back.

"I... you... I'm so sorry" Raphael said

Mirai was crying having rewatching her memories.

"DO YOU SEE WHY RELIGION DIDN'T HELP ME!!!" Mirai yelled

Raphael dropped his dual sword and kneeled down. Mirai sat down and cried as she had just relieved a part of her life she never wanted to live again. Raphael picked his dual sword back up and looked at the central area of the heavenly area.

"I'm sorry lord but I must do what shall be done" Raphael said

Raphael threw his dual sword at the glowing orb in the middle area. The orb shattered and an shockwave came out. The shockwave flew through everyone, Raphael looked at Mirai and soon hugged her as he started to turn into dust.

"I'm sorry for everything you went through" Raphael cried

Mirai felt Raphael and hugged back. Soon she had felt Raphael disappear.

Almost cried while reading this
10/10

You should have added Azrael

sorry for making you repost it
i have not grasped the idea of reverence for other people just yet

I reposted it because of spelling errors

oh lol
well uhh
it’s a good story with or without the errors

Thanks!

YOOOOOO

Not sure how I feel about this being a very strict catholic, but it IS good storytelling

Sorry if I offended you

Oh it’s fine, I’m not gonna cancel you in all 50 states lol

Lol

Bardota really be doing nothing when he should try to help the people he knows and cares for