It looks nice enough. I think you could work on the strokes of the pencil being more in line with the way the fur flows in some spots, and some shading might help distinguish the black neck part.
Zorua! I’ll put the colored version in the comments because my phone was being an idiot and would not load when I tried adding it below this one. Also, I will admit that I traced, but that is the only form of cheating I used.
