To say the least: Wow!
You clearly put a lot of hard work and effort into this story of yours, and it really shows. It's hard for me to follow along, as I, personally, have a difficult time understanding A.I. and all, but yet find this story of yours incredibly interesting! It has a deep, well-constructed plot and, almost certainly, a *ton* of meaningful underlying themes and messages (such as to not be greedy, as with the greed that came with the OMNI, also came the destruction of the universe. However, even from this, there is a message of there always being hope in even the darkest of situations; the exploding Singularity, which came from the end of the world, yet creating a whole new life for a new generation). Is this a basic outline of your story, or are you going to turn this into an entire fleshed-out book one day (if you haven't already)?
Either way, I'd also like to welcome you to WriteNight! I know we don't have many followers or anything, but that just means that your contribution means a lot to our little stream (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) After all, we barely get any submitted images, and so I was quite delighted to finally see an approval que for this stream, for once (*^▽^*)
We try and keep everything safe and friendly here, so if you ever run into any problems whilst on this stream, feel free to contact me, the owner. Negative comments? Flag them. I'll check them out and, if they seem negative, delete them.
Other than that, I hope you have fun for as long as you're on this stream <3
Thank you, and please have a nice rest of your day/night!
