I really like the steampunk sci-fi vibes going on here - I'd really enjoy it if you made this basic plot you have going on here a little more in-depth - just me making a thought out loud. Maybe you should write an original furry OC story on COMMAFUL regarding this plot you have going on in-the-making - I'd really love to see this blossom into a full-fledged thing! Really good job, Moth - keep up the splendiferous good work!
With warm regards, SimoTheFinlandized :)
P.S. Have A Very Merry Christmas (even though it's a little too early now)! I Wish You The Very Best!