fair point. I was drawing him hold something akin to an egyptian Kopesh, but the position is...off...and suggestive. I realized my mistake after drawing it so many years ago. But yeah, that's a flaw I'll own up to. I'm still proud of my drawing otherwise.
Funny story, when I was on deployment I hadn't been drawing much in general, but when I told a chaplain's assistant my ideas, he bought me a drawing pad to encourage me to continue my hobby. This was drawn in an Afghan deployment after years of not drawing too often.