Blank White Template

I know the lineart is a bit pixelated, I tried a new brush and it looks awful lol

I think how you did the glowing and brighter parts is cool
I would add in a little more shading, and don't just use the airbrush
sometimes when I have a dark color in a dark background, I like to outline it with a bit of white.
that's all I have to say for now

A pretty crappy cartoon I did of my sister I did 2yrs ago I haven't been drawing much since due to my grades.

I'm not an expert at cartoons so I would say it's pretty good, just clean up your lines a bit and do a little more with the shading

Maybe I'll fix it up this summer it'll be interesting to see if my style changed at all.

Sure

I'm going to start by saying that you're really good at proportions, however you should practice making your line art neater. also don't over do the airbrush for shading, and use layers. the hands are actually pretty decent.

that's all I have to say for now

Kk
I just wanna say this means a lot coming from you -w-

Thanks!

Is this better

yes

Ok

the grim reaper, only its a furry

there's clearly shading in the tail and the face but not anything else, so I would do more with shading in other parts of the image, but don't just use the airbrush. or, if you just want it to be super simple don't shade it at all, or don't use soft shading. I wouldn't say your line art is messy but I can see little things where the lines don't connect to each other right
I do like what you did with the eyes
also I think you should make the background darker with these kind of things to make it more intense.

sorry, I don't know too much about furries so that's all the advice I can give you.

thx u! i rly needed advice bc when i ask anybody else they just say some trash like "oh it looks fine"
so this was rly helpful thx :D

np!

make sure that the coloring is in the line art.
with the coloring color it out evenly and don't put a lot of force into it. it would also look real nice if you added in some more intense shading
the proportions are actually pretty decent so good job on that
and this part doesn't really have anything to do with your drawing skill but blank paper is better than lined
sorry, that's all I have to say, I don't do art on paper as often anymore.

thanks! this helps out a ton!!!

no prob!

Ok so this might count as an "It's just my style," moment, but the eye literally is a style I was trying, so judge everything but the eye

I actually think the eye is pretty good
with the sparkles on the hair they kinda look scribbled on so I would just make those a bit neater.
this part doesn't really have to do with your drawing skill but the image looks a tiny bit pixelated, and I think the best thing to do is to make the size of your canvas bigger.

that's all I have to say, good job

Thanks for the advice!
The actual drawing is quite smooth and unpixelated, it's because the image had to be compressed due to troubles exporting it. But yeah, this helped, thanks :)

Um can i have your advice on this one to?

really all I have to say is make the line art neater
besides that it's pretty good

Kk

i need help with all of these
sorry for wasting your time

There’s not actually that much background I just couldn’t fit the whole drawing in the blank white template .-.

really all I have to say is fix the line art and the hand

Ty for the advice!

um, this ig

I would just make the nose a bit bigger.
when you use the fill bucket, fill in the area twice, because when you fill it in only once, you can still kind of see some spots where it didn't get completely filled.
I like the colors you chose and I like how simple the design is, it would make a cool sticker or pin.

Yay I'm not the only one who does the double fill thing lol

I’ve never really been an artist compared to most people I know, but I’m trying to get better. I really like your *cough cough* art style. What can I do?

I would start by practicing drawing faces at different angles, it's a very hard thing to do but with practice and looking at tutorials, you can get it eventually. if you need to, you can flip the image and see how the angle looks on the other side, and when you fix it on that side and flip it back over it looks much better.
with the hair, use thinner lines on the inside and have them be in nice, even strokes.
with shading go exaggerate with the different colors, if you were to take a color sample from a photo on someone the color of their clothing is the same color in general, but the darker part (lets say near the armpit) is way way darker than a part that's not in shadows and exposed to the light. if you want it to be very simple you could just use a few colors for shading or you can use a lot of colors and use things to blend it all in like a blur tool, smudge tool, or mix tool. sometimes you can use the airbrush for shading but don't over use it. the shading can also depend on the lighting of the image.
the last thing I have to say is make sure the fingers are even-ish for the hands
I think your line art is very neat, so that part is good.

Thank you so much! This really helps! I flipped the image and It looks really weird so I probably got used to the way it looked at that one angle. I didn’t really have a light source from one particular angle when I was drawing this so I’ll go back and fix that, among many other things

awesome!

you're getting much better!

Thanks! I’ll keep working on this for a while probably. Is there anything else that you see that I need to change? I know the face and hands are kinda derpy haha

just add more shading to the vest and keep the coloring in the hair, you're already improving a lot!

I think I officially have given up on giving this kid a mouth XD. But thanks so much!

np!

My 3rd simplest drawing

I wish I could help on this but I'm actually terrible on landscapes and backgrounds lol

Can I post another one?

sure!

Anything wrong with this one?

I'm going to start off by saying I think the hair is really cool
I think there's the same issue with the anatomy and the eyes as I mentioned in the first one you did, also another thing I noticed about the anatomy on this one is the torso's seem to be very long compared to the legs, so I would either make the legs longer or the torso shorter, or both.
also the cleavage is a bit unrealistic on the one dressed in purple because there should be a little more space for the collar bone area, and the shape is a bit off.
I also really like how you did the bags

that's all I have to say for this one

This is just artwork I did a while ago. So, about the legs being a bit short, it was supposed to be more of a perspective thing than a size thing, so they might seem a little weird. And yeah, the torso looks a bit long now that you mention it. I might need to fix the cleavage as well. The thing about the eyes might be a bit of a something, because it was meant to be a stylistic choice, but it appears to be an error. Speaking of which, I did this one before I did the Sephiroth one, which is why there are several more corrections needed to be made. I think it was also a good thing that I showed you a Sephiroth drawing because I’m normally used to drawing females and I would need a way to help viewers distinguish male character anatomy from female character anatomy. As for this one, people would’ve judged the drawing primarily based on how revealing the girls are, which is something I wouldn’t want. So I’m glad you were able to point out the anatomical errors of the character drawings I’ve shown you so far, especially Sephiroth. Anyway, I would like to thank you for taking the time to criticize both of my drawings

no problem!