Tell me where I need to improve

I just wanted to point out that I can see your improvement🤗Good job.

Ty!

Your improvement is amazing! This could just be your art style, (YOU DONT AT ALL HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME) but maybe make the chin a bit less sharp.

Either way! I love your style and you're a great artist!

Thank you!

for the second one maybe make the highlights more blended in like you did for the 3rd one.
For the 1st one maybe put highlights in the eyes. Like in the red part. And the horns make it like more spiral like.

Thank you for telling me! :)

Ofc!

I see this as a perfect, cool drawing style. I feel that there is one thing. You see, I think that the eyeshade could be better. But, other than that, it's perfect.

Thanks for the info I will try and work on that!

It's amazing though!

That's epic

Top right, new. You need to fix the shading a bit on the hair so it looks as good as bottom left new.