Imgflip is generally recognized as a humorous meme site. Therefore, I will post whatever lame ass thought first pops into my brain. Sometimes funny, sometimes not.
If you'd like to be recognized for your poetic prowess, my advice to you sir is to go to a poetry site.
Also, I upvoted your original meme and comment, think you could return the favor?
Finally, I too know all about the poetic license and how to turn a phrase (sunset, for example). I am not your typical dumb American or 12 year old that populates this site. I have a Bachelor's of Science, graduated Summa Cum Laude with a 3.9 gpa.
Keep up the good work!
