Fair enough, happy writing!

This is very good don't want to sound like a nerd but since you wanted criticism i think you don’t use enough adjectives and i think you should careful of repeating words/phrases like when you said “moving on.Done with introductions”i think you should in this scenario you should use one or the other. If you found this helpful pls let me know and ill hep with the others

I was lowkey gonna say ui was older cause i joined in 2022 but wow you’re a cougar

I have been here since 2022 but i just couldn’t be bothered to make an account i was there whhen who_am_i was stll active so i am quite old you whippersnapper

As a new old gen who dat