Looking great but I have a some stuff to point out for both of them:
Alan:
1. Alan normally just has a fang and not teeth like this, but he does have teeth like this when he gets pissed off enough or when hes going werewolf mode. Samething with the claws
2. Why are bros sword and gun (HIS MAIN WEAPONS MIND YOU) not here???
3. His pupils should be smaller slits, but that's on me bc I have NOT figured out how to draw em yet so I haven't drawn em like that. (Also I haven't been drawing his hands out of laziness lol)
4. His skin isn't black its the same as Roses, but that's genuinely also on me bc I havent shown it yet
Rose:
1. Once again WHY ARE HER FEET AND LEGS SO BIG IM CRINE
2. Ok this might also be on me but her hat is NOT that small
