hi jerry

yo rate this jummbox beat I made

https://soundcloud.com/streetrat-117244421/menu-screen-for-a-game-that

send me the project link and yeah
idk if soundcloud requires accs to listen and im exhausted rn

tinyurl.com/2ahaszyv

i mean, i cant really rate it yet but it wooorks i guess. theres structure. ur improving tho

thx ^^

I'm not much of a musician myself yet but i think i'd say the sound isn't very strong. Try having a more clear melody i think. Also the song feels like it builds up to a melody but suddenly stops i guess.
Also, the chords function as a bass and idk why u did that but its fine