suspiciously announcement temp shaped forehead

Doesn't even have the right syncopation 💔

whar

Syncopation = intentionally placing notes off of the regular flow of the beat to create better groove

It's a very important part of music theory that I highly recommend

like this?
https://www.beepbox.co/#9n31sbk0l00e01t2ma7g0fj07r1i0o432T7v1u71f50p61770q72d42g3q0F21a90k762d06HT-SRJJJJIAAAAAh0IaE1c11T1v1ugcf10t5q00d23A4F0B4Q601bPda6cE0T7v1u70f40p61770q72f5q0E21990l65d06HT-SRJJJJIAAAAAh0IaE1c11T4v1uf0f0q011z6666ji8k8k3jSBKSJJAArriiiiii07JCABrzrrrrrrr00YrkqHrsrrrrjr005zrAqzrjzrrqr1jRjrqGGrrzsrsA099ijrABJJJIAzrrtirqrqjqixzsrAjrqjiqaqqysttAJqjikikrizrHtBJJAzArzrIsRCITKSS099ijrAJS____Qg99habbCAYrDzh00E0b4g000000000h000000000140000000004g000000000p21rIQvQGpEILHWoO4zAi0zHIzFCCrdFA1pE_F4tcQOhQOhQPj97j97jdcAtcw02PhD1AQo7hBl0njdtVl6lltQPnulhBk0

also Im sorry that the links are so long

Not the correct syncopation for recreating megalovania like I assume you were trying?

But ye definitely an improvement. Syncopation is very important for melodies

https://www.beepbox.co/#9n31sbk0l00e01t2ma7g0fj07r1i0o432T7v1u71f50p61770q72d42g3q0F21a90k762d06HT-SRJJJJIAAAAAh0IaE1c11T1v1ugcf10t5q00d23A4F0B4Q601bPda6cE0T7v1u70f40p61770q72f5q0E21990l65d06HT-SRJJJJIAAAAAh0IaE1c11T4v1uf0f0q011z6666ji8k8k3jSBKSJJAArriiiiii07JCABrzrrrrrrr00YrkqHrsrrrrjr005zrAqzrjzrrqr1jRjrqGGrrzsrsA099ijrABJJJIAzrrtirqrqjqixzsrAjrqjiqaqqysttAJqjikikrizrHtBJJAzArzrIsRCITKSS099ijrAJS____Qg99habbCAYrDzh00E0b4g000000000h000000000140000000004g000000000p21kFE_B597shO978At97ghR4o2Ph_i8WpFAzFAzFCCieCieCqp8Wp005Cze39EMezaG0KCqXOGcGGXFCKYGzaE0