Lemon's Fakemon redrawn

Dang those look cool

Agreed, Very Much Agreed. the first one is the best redraw in my opinion as I like the pose a lot!!!. If I had to critique them this is what would be my critique's one for all 3:

#1. Keep the swirls on its belly and the scar on its head, otherwise perfect!!!

#2. ngl a bit confusing design wise because its looking more like electric and steel then electric/psychic and lost the psychic terian behind it (which I do suppose it because you wanted to make them have a constant background which ok fair game) otherwise I like how its lighting makes it look like its standing on it like legs.

#3.Love the face and the eye with the head, however uh it lost its bioluminescent tail thing and that was its source of its light manipulation... and its life...so technically its dead...uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hmm yeah that may be a issue but I did say you could take some artisic liberties and I didn't mention that to you so eh it is what it is.

Also Scrap4729 want me to do 3 of yours???

My answers in that same order:

I kinda forgot the scars on its head, was mostly looking at gila monster because i thought i'd remember the design

I tried making the globe part darker to contrast with the bright lightning which could make it look stronger, and i removed the 2 eyes to make it a huge eyeball(was originally supposed to have much tinier eyes above)

I tried making this as ugly and strange as possible from knowledge it was an ultra beast. I also was a bit confused as your drawing didn't have fins nor tails like the reference image i used

Yeah sure you could pick any

Ye its fine!!! Honestly my favorite of the redisigns was the middle one. Also for the third one that's because I was going to do a evolution to it that looked like a swordfish but never got to it.

Cool