No my cute ship... is gone!
I prefered it before, no offense toaa but your storytelling doesn't mach well dragon's, and i think it's a little bit worse
We're doing a collab we are improvising with material that we give with one another also everyone else seems to like it but I think my writing is good It increases tension It feels people very upset but... To be quite honest I'm not going to ruin the story just because of two opinions but I'll keep that in consideration as constructive criticism
