What do you think

need more spice, details and juice

Like what details? Explain.

The spice: What makes your story unique? that just sounds like celestia´s story
Details: the text you made is very bleak, why does she wants to become a hero/Adventurer, What is that place and its challange
Juice: the game sounds kinda boring, so if you will do it, give it some fun gameplay

Also the thing that makes it different from Celeste is that Nicole is less fighting her inner demons and more fighting haters and people who try to bring her down.

See? That is original, now we are going somewhere

Oh thank you.

Also Nicole always looked up to what she wanted to do since childhood, especially up to her parents.

Also I like Celeste but I also like Cuphead and I kinda wanted to combine them and add my flair also because I wish I could play both at the same time

Thank you. I know I'm embarrassed

Can we memechat

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Just write it down, imma be busy for hours (studying)

It's based on Celeste a little bit. There are parts I'm too embarrassed to explain....

Also the reason for that is also a little embarrassing

Also you're so picky. At least I like kind of boring ideas.

You Don’t need to do be embarassed, and don’t see myself being picky, what I meant to say is that is just sound bland, is just a celeste like game

Nicole's problem is actually that she's really impulsive and she doesn't always realize that she still has things to learn.

nice

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What's wrong

https://soyjakwiki.org/images/f/f2/Chicken_Factory.mp4
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