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Struggles of world building, could use some outside help | I can't confidently say whether or not the "United Empire of Mankind" will keep its name. So I'm holding A pole in the comments between the og and a close contender new name. Oh and feel free to tell me why you chose that name, I encourage it maybe ill finally have closure | image tagged in pain | made w/ Imgflip meme maker
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United Empire of Mankind
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United Commonwealth of Mankind
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Some context of the nation and humanity's backstory:

Government: Unitarian Representative Democracy

Economical Practice: Refined Socialism (Market Socialism)

Motivation: To spread the ideals of the Immortal Revolution across the cosmos, the nation and the human race believes themselves to be the righteous crusaders, liberators of the cosmos from tyranny and oppression.

Historical Events: Humanity was previously enslaved by the Eternal Arkiahn Imperium, after successful revolt, the first republic of humanity was formed, which began to collapse due to internal corruption, extreme libertarianism and a lack of control sparked a civil war, now humanity has reformed into the current power house nation, the question is, what name does this nation deserve?
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the United Nations of Mankind and Humanity
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The key to good name is for it to be memorable. If the name can't be shortened and must stay long, you should attempt to paraphrase the name so when its abbreviated it sounds presentable.

Prime example would be Marvel, with their organization SHIELD, you know them as SHIELD, not Strategic Homeland Intervention, Enforcement and Logistic Division. I don't know the exact details of your world building, but I could give some small example names based on the information given.

We could integrate history of Earth before the formation. Soviet Union, is a socalist. Why not take it? Terran Soviet Empire, Global Union of Terran Socalism.

Obviously this is your story and your own canvas. I get no say in it. I would understand if you reject any of these names, but I hope this little yapping helped you with your world building
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Actually this was something I concidered, and I actually am really glad you commented this. I love both Commonwealth and Empire as terms, but maybe there can be a way of combining the two, with "United Empire of Mankind" being the more recognizable name compared to its proper title. Kinda like how many people refers to the USSR as the Soviet union, as opposed to saying Union of Soviet Socialist Republics every time someone brings up the nation. Thanks!
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Since you are writing a story and building a world of your own, let me give a you a tip I learned through writing of my own story, I learned that it should contain both internal and external input. Both are equally important. Outside ideas should be considered and processed to match your own style. While both me and Sketchy agreed on freely using each other's characters in our own timelines, hence in any scenario we are getting internal and external ideas. I am writing a part of my story, so I tell him about it, the stuff that I tell him is the internal concept. While the few considerable tweaks, additions and removals are external feedback. This way your world feels natural and not forced, since your ideas can be perceived as great progression, most of the time it is not, outside eyes are great at spotting those.

TLDR; from my experience it is great to have both your own ideas and concepts with your friends', since it allows your story to be a more detailed and believable world.
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Ah I see! Outside input definitely would help, I often time find myself question ideas, or having a lack of creative Ideas in certain parts of the lore.
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Well, story writer to story writer, I am open to helping. maybe we could throw ideas on discord. who knows, but I would be down to help!
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I don't use discord as of now due to parents not wanting me on that platform (don't blame them, its gotten really bad as of recently), does meme chat on Imgflip work? Not sure as it could be a little slower.
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Well, I don't check imgflip that often, seeing that I can'r f**king post here yet. I was once a [[BIG SHOT]], but lost my accoujt and now I have to get 10k to post shit and ts lwk pmo gng
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😭✌zang twinio. I could try making a discord sometime but idk. Used to have a 40k point acc back in 2021 but lost it, not like it was major but I would have preffered to keep it, so I get it, how old was the account?
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made it in 2019, and last it like 9 months ago, so pretty old. Like I said twin, I was a big shot. I was uhm, you would say an og.
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😱😱 Omg an og in my presence. I'm honored πŸ”₯
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Calm down. Jeez. Just a nerd over here, not Jesus Christ. Besides, I think you genuinely might be a better artist than me
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Lol ik, I was joking πŸ˜‚πŸ˜…πŸ‘. And I appreciate the compliment on my art, didn't know you checked it out. πŸ€”
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I can't confidently say whether or not the "United Empire of Mankind" will keep its name. So I'm holding A pole in the comments between the og and a close contender new name. Oh and feel free to tell me why you chose that name, I encourage it maybe ill finally have closure