Feedback plz

69 views • 2 upvotes • Made by _MotherAlicia_ 2 months ago in MS_memer_group

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Electricity_Pixel
0 ups, 2mo, 1 reply
Link
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 2mo, 1 reply
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1486595
Electricity_Pixel
0 ups, 2mo, 1 reply
Me likee
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 2mo
Ty!
Extra_Crispy_Toast
0 ups, 2mo, 1 reply
link
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 2mo, 1 reply
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1486595
Extra_Crispy_Toast
0 ups, 2mo, 2 replies
Good story. I like it personally. Though you used the wrong neurotransmitter when describing Karunar's purpose. It's dopamine, not serotonin.
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 2mo
Ah!! thatnk you so much! I knew I got the wrong one! will be changing that right away!
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 1mo, 1 reply
Btw I posted more chapters

I thought you'd might like to know

Good day good person
Extra_Crispy_Toast
0 ups, 1mo, 1 reply
I noticed. I think I stopped reading the eden story bc of the "self harm" trigger warning.
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 1mo, 1 reply
yeah sorry

I just honestly didn't know wtf to put there

it didn't have any warnings but had warning ya know?
Extra_Crispy_Toast
0 ups, 1mo, 1 reply
it listed them above the story
_MotherAlicia_
0 ups, 1mo
no ik

It's just that I didn't know what to put

so I put what may happen

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CHAT; I HAVE MADE ANOTHER STORY I'M ACTUALLY LIKING THIS ONE :3 ANYONE WANNA READ? I LIKE FEEDBACK!