"Hurricane" (story)

*the scene takes place in a Correllan Scout Ship, which multiple pilots are operating, along with a more heavily armored Coritan Captain, with a scar over his visor and a robed Coritan next to him*

Coritan Advisor: Captain Zyex, We are closing in on the planet Oura. The home planet of our current enemy, the Ouranian Race.

Captain Zyex: List off their crimes.

Coritan Advisor: Rebellion against us, murder of one of our chiefs, destruction of multiple of our ships, and mass theft of our trade ships.

Captain Zyex: And have we tried to negotiate with them?

Coritan Advisor: Yes sir. We have. But instead of peace, they decided to declare war.

Captain Zyex: Then that leaves us no choice but to send him.

Coritan Advisor: Are you sure sir?...

Captain Zyex: We gave them their chances and they denied them. i will contact the Elders and see what they think.

Coritan Advisor: Yes sir...

*Captain Zyex would sit down on his captains chair, which he presses a button, activating a hologram with the Elders, which Zyex would do a special hand gesture to respect them*

Captain Zyex: My most humble apologies for my disruption, but i have located the Ouranians home planet. They have denied peace, killed our chief, raided our ships and has declared war upon us. Do we send him?

Elder Unora: Captain Zyex, don't you think its a bit excessive?

Captain Zyex: Of course not, your greatness. We tried to negotiate peace but they rather have blood. So we will return that blood back much fiercer.

Elder Unora: So be it. We will send him down to your ship for preparation. He will go down the planet and give them all one last chance for peace. Understood?

Captain Zyex: Understood, your greatness.

*the hologram ends, which it views back to the planet of Oura*

Coritan Advisor: I pray that the Ouranians come to their senses.

Captain Zyex: Me too.

*a few hours pass, which suddenly a beeping sound is heard on the captains screen*

Captain Zyex: He is here. Open the airlock.

Coritan Advisor: Yes, Captain.

*the airlocks behind the Scout Ship would open, which a thud is heard inside the ship*

Captain Zyex: Make sure its really him.

Coritan Advisor: Yes, sire.

*The Advisor would waddle his way to a screen, which he presses a few buttons, seeing inside the airlock*

Coritan Advisor: Its him.

Captain Zyex: Open the doors.

*the doors would open, which the airlocks fumes would spread across the room, where a hulking figure is seen in the fog*

Captain Zyex: Welcome... General Thrull.

*from the smoke, Thrull would come from it, but he looks rather different. He would have no metal gauntlet, and he would have no cape, which it seems he has both his arms*

Thrull: Hello, Captain.

*all of the pilots and the advisor in the room would look at Thrull, which a few would shiver in fear, except for the Captain, where he stands his ground*

Captain Zyex: You know what to do. Go down there and tell them their last warning. If they refuse... Well you know what to do-

*Thrull would grab Captain Xyex by the neck and pins him to the wall, shocking the other pilots and advisor*

Thrull: Do not tell me what to do, i do things on my own terms.

Captain Zyex: *choking* Thrull, please... Let go..

*Thrull would throw Captain Zyex into the wall, making a dent*

Thrull: Your all bark, no bite. No backbone. Get up, worm.

*Captain Zyex would get up, holding his own throat a bit in pain*

Coritan Advisor: Are you alright, Captain?

Captain Zyex: More then fine...

*after the Captain gets up fully, he would see Thrull cleaning off his weapons*

Captain Zyex: The more time you spend doing that is the more likely we can get discovered!

Thrull: Do not rush me or else i will use your blood to clean my sword, and thats a promise.

Captain Zyex: Fine...

*The captain would move back a bit, trying to stay away*

Coritan Advisor: Your one word away from having your spine ripped out, can you stop talking to him! Have you ever heard of what he does to planets when they declared war!

Captain Zyex: Ive heard. I think its a load of-

Thrull: Ok im ready.

Captain Zyex: *whisper* I doubt he will live this.

*Thrull would grab his weapons and exit the airlock, which he floats in space and flies down*

Coritan Advisor: May Correllus have mercy...

*the scene soon takes place on the planet of Oura, which it would have a orange landscape with a large and grand city, with a high tech fortress in the middle of the city, where suddenly Thrull flies down and examines it*

Thrull: So that's where the leader must live.

*Thrull would then fly into the fortress, breaking in, which he finds himself in the throne room*

Thrull: There it is.

*Thrull would look at the throne, which he sees a heavily armored alien with a armored crest on his head, a purple cape, and a royal helmet covering his face*

King Talus: YOU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!

Thrull: A chance. To stand down to the Correllan Empire. I rather you resist.

King Talus: WE WILL NOT STAND DOWN! WE WILL KEEP FIGHTING UNTIL OUR VERY LAST BREATH!

Thrull: *small sadistic chuckle* Good.

*Thrull would float up and charges at Talus, which Talus gets his golden sword and charges as well, where the two would clash blades*

Thrull: HA! I LIKE THE SPIRIT!

*Talus would punch Thrull on his face, making his helmets visor flicker a bit*

Thrull: MORE!

*Talus would charge at Thrull, punching him in the gut and slashing his chest armor, making a few scratches*

Talus: YOU WONT LIVE TO SEE TOMORROW!

*Thrull would spin his war hammer and slams it into Talus's chest, breaking a few ribs*

Thrull: YOU MAY HAVE FIGHTING SPIRIT, BUT I GOT SOMETHING TO BREAK THAT!

*Thrull would grab Talus and drags him across the room before Thrull gets punched in the face by Talus*

Talus: I WILL PROTECT MY HOMEWORLD WITH MY LIFE!

Thrull: YOU WILL FAIL!

*Thrull would then grab Talus by the neck and flies up in the sky, where the two trade blows with eachother*

Talus: WE WILL NEVER SUBMIT TO YOUR EMPIRE!

Thrull: GOOD BY ME! I WANT YOU TO RESIST! JUST SO I CAN FEEL YOUR BEATING HEART IN MY HANDS!

*Talus would get his sword ready, which he would do another slash on Thrulls side*

Thrull: MORE! I WANT MORE!

*Thrull would tackle Talus into the city, which they tear through several buildings*

Talus: IF MORE IS WHAT YOU WANT, THEN SO BE IT!

*Talus would charge his sword up with magical flames*

Thrull: YES! MORE OF THAT!

*Thrull would charge at Talus at full speed, but then Talus does a big slash to Thrulls forearm, slicing it off*

Thrull: ARURGHHHHHHHH!!!!!...

*Thrull would kneel to the ground, which he look at the stump at the bottom end of his upper arm, gushing white glowing blood*

Talus: YOU BIT OFF MORE THEN YOU COULD CHEW!

*Talus would then kick Thrull into a building, tearing it apart*

Talus: IF THIS IS WHAT THE CORRELLAN EMPIRE SENDS, THEN WE WILL FIGHT FOR OUR FREEDOM!

*Thrull would get up from the rubble, enraged*

Thrull: YOU MAY HAVE TAKEN MY ARM... BUT I WILL TAKE YOUR LIFE.

*Thrull would fly towards Talus, which he uses his remaining arm to punch and slash Talus, making him weaker as the fight goes on*

Thrull: YOUR HEAD WILL BE MINE!

Talus: NEVER!

*Talus would try to punch Thrull, but Thrull catches the punch with his remaining arm and breaks his hand, hurting Talus*

Talus: MY HAND!

*Thrull would then shove his arm into Talus's stomach, ripping out his intestines*

Talus: GAHHH... NO...

Thrull: THE WEAK RISE STRONGER! AND YOU WILL FALL!

*Thrull would grab Talus by the throat and drags him across the area, tearing off bits of Talus's armor*

Talus: NO... I NEED TO PROTECT MY PEOPLE!

Thrull: AFTER THIS, THERE WONT BE ANYONE FOR YOU TO SAVE!

*Thrull would then fly up with Talus, which he then charges all the way down, going through the entire planet to the other side*

Talus: NO! STOP!

Thrull: HAHAHAHAHAH!!!

*Thrull would then do it again over and over and over, burning Talus severaly and soon, the planet would look like a destroyed husk*

Talus: My world... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY WORLD?!

Thrull: HEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!

*Thrull would ram Talus into the side of the dead planet, which he would place him on the ground, where Thrull puts his hand around his neck again, choking him a bit, but Thrull would lean in close to Talus's face*

Thrull: You think im doing this for the glory of the Correllan Empire? You must be very mistaken. I'm not doing this for the empire. Hell... everyone is afraid of me in the Empire. Nobody wants to speak with me. Nobody wants to be around me. They all see me as a monster. But i embrace it. I do not cry about it or write it in some journal or whine about it to a therapist. And WHY i don't do that? Nobody in this entire universe would care anyway, nor should i. I embrace what they see me as and i love it. What amuses me and gives me great joy is seeing you in my blood drenched hands on your dying world.

*Talus would stare at Thrull with pure rage, choking still*

Thrull: Take it to your grave.

*Thrull would tighten his grip more, which he tries to choke out Talus*

Talus: *choking* NO...

*Talus would grab a broken shard of his sword and stabs it in Thrulls helmet, piercing one of his eyes*

Thrull: AUGHHH...

Talus: I WILL TAKE YOU WITH ME...

*suddenly, Thrull would start to laugh manically, which he stares at Talus with his visor flickering, blood dripping from his helmets wound*

Thrull: Your so naive. Your dead and you don't even know it.

*Thrull would then stomp onto Talus's chest, which he then starts to pull at Talus's neck, which then...*

*RIP!*

*Talus's head would get ripped off by Thrull, which he holds it out and does a battle cry*

Thrull: There we go...

*Thrull would turn Talus's body over and takes his cape, which he puts the purple cape on himself, fitting perfectly*

Thrull: Its been done, Captain Zyex. Get me a medic.

*Thrull would reach a hand over to the side of his helmet, broadcasting his command*

Captain Zyex: *on the feed* Yes sir.

*the scene then takes place on Corrella in a medical room*

Coritan Doctor: General Thrull... Do you hear me?

*Thrull would get up from a medical bed, which his injured arm would have a metal gauntlet on it*

Thrull: What... Why do i have this?

*Thrull would look at his gauntlet, moving its fingers and arm slightly*

Coritan Doctor: So from tests, we found out that Talus's sword has negated your healing factor. You may not regenerate your forearm, nor your eye. However, we have used cybernetics to give you a cybernetic gauntlet made of the strongest metals we can find, and we managed to save your eye, but you may not see out of it.

Thrull: Good enough doctor.

Coritan Doctor: Your armor is also with us, ready to be used once again when you are healed. But if i may ask, why did you take Talus's cape?

Thrull: I took it as a trophy. It will show that ive survived the worst of the worst. My greatest accomplishment. My biggest triumph. I will wear it as my banner and as a warning to all those who face me that they will never see the stars again.

Coritan Doctor: Yes sir.

*after a few days, the scene takes place in the armory, which Thrull would put on his armor*

Thrull: I am anew, once again.

*Thrull would grab his weapons and holsters them, where he walks out the room, ready to serve once again.*

(THE END)

no offense cuz this is a general thing and it's not that big a deal but it feels so awkward to see people use "would" to describe something like in the first part. It feels like you're saying it didn't actually happen.

Oh come on

I like the story though

Even if it is DEFINITELY based off of... a certain evil superhero, from a certain show.

It's a solid 8/10 for me, pretty good.

Wha

I love it because it's like stellaris

Explain

A game by Paradox Interactive

ah ok

W story btw

X: Zy...what...?

{His names is Xylex for context}