warning im not saying posting but starting the making of it

yes

Do u make music

check out the link in my bio it will speak for itself

Ok listening rn

Is this your singing and songwriting

yes it is , everything is me made

Ok I’ve heard a few ppls songs and this prolly the best
Great song structure and production
Can’t rly hear the lyrics I would mix it better and turn up the vocals
But srsly this good and ur hearing this from someone who predominantly listens to rap
Great job

thanks a lot for this feedback
for the vocals yea my mic is kinda shit but the lyrics are normally viewable above the comment section if you want to check in details
oh so if you like rap maybe youll like one of my other song that is kinda rap but its not really rap , but its heavy meaning rhymes , if you wanna check it out just click on my profile its named "fight for your life"
thanks again for the nice feedback

Just read the lyrics good stuff fitting stuff

Just try and up the volume on the vocals in bandlab or maybe put a distortion filter of sorts

I’ll check it out later

Aight thanks for the tips

it honestly feels good to encounter someone that first listens then states their opinion

Ofc bro always
Tryna be real out here cuz i genuinely hate it when mfs don’t know music but they judge or they don’t have developed taste yk

U very welcome

Mfs* im Cooked af

lol

Few ppl as in mf here

(except the drums i dont know how to play drums i just know how to click on a screen to place beats)

So u programmed the drum machine?

Rythmic box, yes i did

Fire af

And is this your production

yes it is