no offense the lineart looks kinda flat and kinda wiggly i suggst having a little more confidence in your strokes and try experimenting with the size of your lines they are a little small
From my experience with shaky hands, thick lines will actually make it less obvious. It's the entire reason art I make uses a line thickness anywhere from 2.5px-4.0px.
and uhhh why are you forcing yourself to speak like this
"gng" it just feels a little unnatural
not trying to change the way you speak thats not what im trying to say
it just seems a little off?
fair
but then again, the person who made it still did a good job
I still personally like it tho yeah, the art itself could use some work
also what does /lh mean