It's better than the other one in term of sound so don't worry about your ears getting destroyed

https://www.bandlab.com/track/210ed706-d10f-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6?revId=200ed706-d10f-f011-aaa7-0022484892d6

Please learn music theory and remake this banger

By this what are you saying exactly , what is wrong

Music theory is what you need to know in order to make music that sounds pleasing to ear. I've lern it. The drums and piano is just so wrong

.... it's been like.... 7 years im learning music theory ... and the drums doing this loop is on purpose but just to know, what exactly is wrong with the piano

Bro listen to the beginning wtf is it

is it only this? cause it's ALSO on purpose

Stop embarrassing yourself. If you wanna be a musician so bad why don't you learn how to be one

btw , i'm already a musician since a lot of time , im an ARTIST since 3 days

And btw , i would have been embarrassed if i lefted something that sounded bad NOT ON PURPOSE , but, here , YOU are the one embarrassed, YOU are the one that make it sounds like you know more than me about MY OWN F**KING SONG, YOU are the one that CANT STAND for a little bit of WEIRD SHIT ON PURPOSE

I'm not saying you accidentally put it. You clearly don't know how chords work (bet you don't even know what a chord is) nor have you got any idea how drums are supposed to go along. And yes I am 100% certain I know more than you about music. If you can't take criticism stfu, that's what helps you improve the most.

I LEARNED WHAT I NEED TO KNOW

NO YOUR SHIT SUCKS ASS

fym idk what chord is , i f**king know what a Bdim7 means , and maybe i will stfu about your critisism but i wont stfu about your insults

MY CRITICISM IS THAT YOU REFUSE TO LEARN WHAT YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO KNOW

says the one who thinks he's superior in everything

Ok I've had enough, first i was asking questions to see if there was something i could improve but seeing you being a bitch about something i've made on PURPOSE , which means I KNOW it SOUNDS BAD but i DECIDED to put it IN THE SONG cause for ME it is A.O.K TO PUT SOMETHING THAT YOU THINK FITS THE WHOLE THING THAT IS LITTERALLY BASED ON ADDICTION AND CONFUSION THAT IS ACTUALLY SOMETHING REALLY BAD IN LIFE , I THINK ITS OK TO PUT SOMETHING THAT SOUNDS BAD AT THE START

If you wanna improve, criticism along with tips on how to improve would help much better than just compliments. You don't know about music a bit and still trying to be a musician, like either learn or don't be a musician dumbass

I know how to take criticism but i think criticism isnt saying "stop embarrassing yourself and learn how to be a musician"

That's not an insult, that's more of a tip. How is the chef gonna cook when he never learned to do so

shut up i dont want you two to launch sharpened knife at each other when they all bounce of yall skin.

where have i said my shit perfect ? oh and telling me that i dont know shit about stuff i know perfectly well is supposed to help me get better ? interesting

he wanted you to give him more informations about what was wrong not what was music theory. Hes telling you since the beginning that he has 8 years of music school (so instruments AND music theory). Then for whatever reasons you decide that he deosnt know what music theory, chords and what its like to be a musician. Since the first comment, I saw no compliment or tips, just salad and some cheese ifykwim. And when theres too much salad and cheese with no meat and bread bro lemme tell you the sandwhich is f**king ruined. Then for some reasons you insist on the fact his song sucks and blablabla (not saying that his song is perfect) and youre against the fact he made that on purpose. Im genuiely confused bruv. what do you win in all this ?? Some kind of internet ego or some shit ? the arguement leads to nowhere. I want both parties to reconciliate.

ok bro its my argue not yours i appreciate the help but lemme handle it pls

you know what kind of criticism is good ? The sandwhich one : you have the bread that is some kind of comment saying thingies like "this good/this could be better/awesome" then you have the salad which is the "however/but/tho I think" and tomato that is "you should reconsider .../make this....instead of that..." and then cheese : cause right now this.... / cuz thats kinda lame..." the sausage/meat : yet i liked when you did .../that thing however was awesome/this was great tho..." and finally the bread again "overall, I think it could be better yet it has potential/ at the end, thats not bad but could make a few modifications/all this to say keep going and dont be scared to change some things there and there". ALWAYS keep a nice approach if you dont want to hurt the person youre talking to. Cuz what you did right thre was straight up : "SUCKs ASS" "sounds so bad" etc... dont you see whats wrong in there ??? If you want the artist to handle the criticism, help him a bit and make it come with tips and compliments, cuz these deosnt hurt anyone. However if your intention was to ruin the day of that dude, get tf out and shut your mouth. treat peoples like you would want them to treat you. Learn to be someone good or just dont be anyone dumbass.

That's what I tried to, if you look at the first comments. He then goes on and says his shit is perfect and stuff he just doesn't like the salad he just wants the bread if ykwim. I'm trying to help his ass but he doesn't like it

it never dat serious 💔

btw thanks for calling it a banger

The drums are not it and I'm not your teacher to be telling how it's supposed to be. There are even lessons on youtube

Its not even drums its a f**king rhythmic box and i also hear nothing wrong with it cause as long as it keeps the pulse its f**king okay. And as i can see you just like to drag the argue further and further cause you want me to f**king feel bad cause someone criticised my song, why bro ? What do you get telling me im not a musician , its been 8 years im doing trumpet , 6 im doing guitars , 3 years im doing accordion, im in a semi-pro funk band also, so i pretty much think i passed the "learn how to play music" requirement

you're really an idiot. F**king dumbass if you wanna be a musician then go learn music theory. That's what you need to know in order to COMPOSE music. Why don't you like that you need to learn shit? You'll entirely understand what I say cos you're f**king clueless now

ITS BEEN 7 F**KING YEARS IM LEARNING THEORY I EVEN GOT THE BEM AND IN CASE YOU DONT KNOW IT MEANS "Brevet d'Etude Musicale" ILL LET YOU F**KING TRANSLATE IT IF YOU WANT , BTW I F**KING LIKE LEARNING NEW SHIT MAYBE THATS F**KING WHY I LEARNED HOW TO PLAY SO MANY INSTRUMENTS AND IM NOT GONNA WAIT TILL I DIE TO LEARN MORE OF HEM

MUSIC THEORY IS WHAT YOU LEARN TO COMPOSE MUSIC, LEARNING TO PLAY INSTRUMENTS IS ANOTHER THING, AND YOU DO NOT KNOW MUSIC THEORY IDIOT

ok bro youre running in circle there.

call me idiot you aint any better cause you skipped the part where i was talking about my f**king BEM

You skip my shit. Music theory is what you need to know in order to compose (make your own) music, a person who knows it would carefully put the pieces together and make a banger, not by putting the melody like a broken passport

you skipped my shit again . "Brevet d'Etude musicale" translates to "Certificate of Musical Study"

You might be playing instruments but making music isn't something you just start doing. That beat in the back, compare it to that of bigger musicians and see my point.

the funny thing is you tryna compare me with professionals when i started MAKING music 3 days ago ( and im not saying LEARNING MUSIC THEORY 3 days ago , ts since 7 years)

You f**king know what I found a youtube video that explains what I was trying to say about drums better
Do give it a watch it will help you improve even https://youtu.be/CkPmKcPjSlk

ALRIGHT FINALLY A USEFULL COMENT thank you i'll check it out