bridges and broken hearts

Bridges and Broken Hearts (Verse 1) Twelve years old, a secret life, Dark rooms, trembling nights, Parents scream, their words like knives, But my siblings' smiles keep me alive. (Pre-Chorus) Underneath the weight, I'm holding on tight, My brother's got my back, but it don’t feel right. Sneaking through shadows, running from the pain, Haters gonna hate, but I'm stuck in this game. (Chorus) Bitches always getting hurt, Lost in a world that feels like dirt. But I wear a smile, I pretend I'm fine, Protecting my heart, keeping them shy. (Verse 2) Memories flash, the laughs we shared, Late nights online, no one ever cared. Telling my story to friends in a chat, But they couldn’t see the storm in my past. (Pre-Chorus) Falling out of love, it’s a cruel design, When the news broke, and the stars aligned. They told me it’s over, they couldn’t understand, How a heart could break with a single hand. (Chorus) Bitches always getting hurt, Lost in a world that feels like dirt. But I wear a smile, I pretend I'm fine, Protecting my heart, keeping them shy. (Bridge) You drove off the bridge, I couldn’t hold on, Two souls lost, where did we go wrong? Hate cuts deep, like a knife in the dark, But your love was my light, when I fell apart. (Chorus) Bitches always getting hurt, Lost in a world that feels like dirt. But I wear a smile, I pretend I'm fine, Protecting my heart, keeping them shy. (Outro) So here’s to the bridges and all the tears, Hope you find peace, away from the fears. I’ll keep your memory, won’t let it fade, For the love that we lost, I’ll never trade. what y'all think of this one?