Chapter 1: Welcome Home

Good read
I’d give it an 8/10
The pacing can sometimes be a bit off towards the end, but overall it’s pretty good. Also I think it could be a bit more confusing to users that don’t pay attention to rps, but honestly I wouldn’t know.

I mean
Idk I'm gonna be using mostly new stuff so ppl wont have to learn about my characters

But then people won’t know what’s knew and what’s not and feel overwhelmed

Knew

But then the old stuff will just be new stuff to them
Whatever man I’m just gonna make these

I wasn’t objecting against shit man

Yea I wasn’t mad or anything

Saike sits on his bed, gazing upon an old picture. It had been a year since she disappeared, and it was the only one he had of her. He sighs, as he delicately puts it back in his wallet and leaves his room to see Maxwell, one of his sons, Maximus, another one of his sons, and Audrey, his daughter. They're all distracted by the tv, watching some sort of cartoon. Konton, Saike's wife, sits at the table, looking at her phone while eating breakfast. He walks over to her, and she looks up at him.
Konton: Oh, good morning hon, how did you sleep?
Saike replies with a smile, but a hint of sorrow within.
Saike: oh, i slept fine.
Konton offers some breakfast she left on the counter for him, but he says that he isn't hungry and has to go somewhere, leaving the house. His walk feels heavy, like someone's on his shoulders, as he comes upon a cemetery. The wind blows cold, the air stinging Saike like every bee in the multiverse. He walks into it, and very deep into it, to find a smaller gravestone. The god sits down next to it, and places his hand on the ground in front of the grave, and makes some crystal blood flowers rise from it. It begins to rain, a sorrowful rain, and he slices a bit in his palm, and makes a blood umbrella over him and the grave.
Saike: hey.. hon.. I know it's been a long while, and I'm sorry for failing you.. as always.
He looks back at the grave, not expecting an answer, but brushes off some of the dirt covering her name.
"Anne Chi"
As well as
“Presumed dead”
Saike smiles a little bit, seeing her name, and reminiscing the little times he had with her, as he stands back up, in front of the grave. But that smile soon turns to a small frown, as he senses someone behind him, someone he used to know.

A woman, draped in a dark deep blue cloak , with a long black and white scythe, stands behind Saike, who doesn't turn around, but he knows she's here.
???: Saike.
Saike turns around, hand near Kuroba, his sword, and replies with: What do you want.
She seems a bit disappointed to the fact he has his hand ready to try to kill her, but nevertheless she has a message to tell him: Listen, I chose to do this, because I wanted you to come with safely and not get hurt in the process. We need you to come back, he’s planning something that he will make you join, whether you like it or not.
She doesn’t look happy to deliver these news, but she doesn’t falter, as Saike stays silent.
Saike: no. I won’t go back. Ever.
The mysterious woman sighs, and gives him one last warning: Saike, please.. hon-
Saike: don’t f**king call me that. And no. I’ve had my answer.
As he blinks, she’s gone, the last thing he sees of her is disappointment in her eyes. Scoffing it off, he begins to walk back home, but someone else follows far behind.
He arrives home, to see no one around, but he can hear that Rose is over and playing with Maximus and Maxwell. Konton is heard nowhere though, maybe out or sleeping. When he's about to sit down, though, a knock at the door is heard.
The air is tense, as he walks over and opens the door, to see a man, in a full suit of armor, who immediately grabs Saike by the neck and throws him outside against a tree, making him yell in pain.
Saike: what? you're not gonna introduce yourself first?!
The armored man points his sword at Saike
???: Saike Chi, you are to report to hell at once, or else you and your family will suffer the consequences.
He's silent for a moment.
Saike: he really wants me that badly, huh?
and who are you to tell me to go?
???: I am Hakri, fifth division of the Defiant Order, here to collect you by force if needed.
The front of his house is silent. He knows he could beat this person, but if he does, his familes safety comes into play.

Saike arises, and walks over to Hakri.
Saike: I'll go willingly, as long as my family stays out of this.
Hakri has no visible emotion, since he has a helmet on, but he smiles under the metal, as he puts a hand on Saikes shoulder.
Hakri: good, now follow me
He says, as he lifts his hand, one that has the insignia of hell on it, and it glows, spontaneously opening a portal in front of them. Saike walks through, and so does Hakri. But unknowingly to them, Rose is just walking outside to see what's going on, along with the maxes, and she catches a glimpse of the portal, and the insignia of hell, which she tries to run through, but it disappears before she can do so.
Maxwell: What was that?
Rose: It was a portal! There was a symbol and.. and I saw Mister Saike go through!
Maximus: oh.. I mean.. he’s probably alright then.. right?
Rose thinks for a minute, and then comes up with a conclusion.
Rose: in 24 hours starting now, if he isn’t back, we’ll meet up right here, and figure out a plan, but if he comes back, he’s ok!
The maxes nod in agreement, as Rose says her goodbyes, leaving for her house.
Saike looks around, as Hakri marches to the side. He's in front of a throne, with a man draped in shadow looking down on him. His father, a taller, black haired man with armor that has eyes all over it, Shochu.
Saike: Why have you brought me here.
He looks to his fathers side for a moment, to see the woman who had met with him earlier. His mother, whom as soon as Saike looks at her, looks away, ashamed.
Shochu: Straight to the point, aren't we? Well.. you haven't been up to date on hell politics, right?
He nods in response.
Shochu smiles, and says: Remember this, if you leave hell, your whole family will be killed.
As Hakri opens a portal beside Saike and kicks him in.
Saike yells out: HEY-
But the portal is closed before he says anything else.

Saike: Motherf**ker..
He looks around his surroundings, a battlefield scoured in flames, with a couple angels walking through. One having curly grey hair, and the other having straight white.
'Why are angels over here? They should be in heaven'
Walking over to them, they notice him and get their blades ready.
Saike: hello, I was wonder-
The angel with the white hair cuts him off by flying past him, slashing his chest in the process. Saike gasps for air.
Saike: What the f**k is wrong with you?!
The angel who didn't attack him yet, does so and stabs Saike through the chest with her sword.
Saike: Fine. You clearly don't want to talk.
The angel who stabbed him through the chest, seeing that he didn't even flinch to being stabbed straight through with a sword, magically has a change of heart.
Angel 1: Wait wait wait don't-
Saike had already kicked them down, and unsheathed Kuroba.
Saike: oh, now you wanna talk?
Angel 1: y- yea, sure! Just d- don't kill me! I thought you were just a soldier!
Saike: and what would that change? you're still killing an innocent life!
Angel 2 was sneaking up behind Saike, but Angel 1 crosses their hand across their neck, signaling not to do it, and he backs up, not engaging.
Angel 1: I don't want to fight in this war! I don't have a choice!
Saike: ..war? What war is this?
Angel 1: You haven't heard? Are you new here?
Saike: No, I just came back for...
He pauses for a minute, thinking of an excuse.
Saike: ...family reasons. I just got back today.
Angel 1 laughs a bit: Horrible time to visit family. But.. let me tell you everything I know
It had been peaceful for a long time in hell, and heaven, but I couldn't tell you the details of what started happening in hell, I used to live in heaven with him.
She says as she point at the angel who passed Saike, who slightly waves back when Saike looks at him.

Angel 1: But at some point, the ruler of hell, Shochu, declared war on heaven, nobody really knows why, but the leading theory is that he felt the power between heaven and hell was imbalanced, and he wanted more. So he gathered citizens of hell, and convinced them to join the war effort. He gathered 7 divisions, each led by one person. He called them the Defiant Order. Heaven had no choice but to draft people into the war, since nobody wanted to join in. But that's where we are now.
Angel 2: Yea.. we don't want to fight, but if we don't kill someone, they're most likely to kill us.
Saike: I see.
He puts his hand out to help up Angel 1, and she takes it.
Angel 1: Thank you, what's your name?
Saike: I'm Saike, what's yours?
Angel 1: I'm Vanessa and that's Richard, your names interesting though, sounds like sake, y'know, the alcohol?
Saike: Yea, my fathers named that way too, after a drink like that.
Vanessa looks at him shocked, and so does Richard
Both angels: YOUR FATHER IS SHOCHU?!
He looks disappointed in himself.
Saike: f**k.. shouldn't have said that
Vanessa steps back, scared.
Vanessa: y- you're not gonna h- hurt us.. right?
Saike: No! Why would my opinion change just because my dad sucks?
Richard, who has gotten up and is standing next to Vanessa: ...we just can't trust anyone who is under him
Saike: I'm not under him, he threatened to kill the family I've made if I didn't come to hell.. and.. I think he wanted me to fight for him.
Vanessa: Oh.. I guess that's understandab- OHMYGODWE'REGONNABELATEFORROLECALL
She grabs Richards arm: NICEMEETINGYOUMRSAIKEHAVEAGOODTIMEBYE
And with that she scurries off, Richard surprised by how quick she is.
'So he wanted me to fight in his stupid war.. whatever you want your highness.
But at least some angels aren’t racist.'
He walks through the field more, and comes upon a broken city, scarred by the battle once fought there.

Ooh nice, interesting partake on Your heaven and hell

And

Are we gonna see more of Vanessa-

I’ll let you guess

(Finally I got around to respond 😭)

Lmao

I came for the giggles and shit and I found gold. Keep cooking man 🔥

Thank you

Chapter 2: imgflip.com/i/9ns41q