Thats really good here are my notes on it
1. I feel like both N and Uzi said things they wouldn't normally say in the show. Especially N. but I could still tell it was him
2. Uzi doesn't actually have blades in her arms. Instead of weapons she only has the solver, so it would have been cool to see that in the story.
3. Also neither N or Uzi has red eyes or body parts
But don't worry about those they're just minor details. The story was really good, definitely write more