rock works too. just prefer slam.

I am not afraid to keep on living I am not afraid to walk this world alone only if you stay I'll be forgiven nothing you can stop me going home *fire guitar riff*

nice. that's pretty good. i just prefer:

"this is a dangerous group" *groovy heavy down tuned guitar riff* (guttural slug - hacksaw surgery)

peelingflesh and extermination dismemberment are also some pretty crazy slammers check those two out (i suggest terror domination for ED and make a move for peelingflesh (those are my favorite songs by them than you will see what i mean by groovy heavy down tuned guitar riff))

Waffle

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