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The "suck my dong" part diminished the quality of the stanza, and adds too many syllables to the line. I suggest somehow revising that line to shorten it and maybe remove the smd part.

Thanks but I got a plan to make it work, if I forget the plan when I get home to make the song though I'll take your advice

I like the idea of it, but I just can't see what genre this music would be. What would it be?

Usually my music doesn't belong in a certain genre but I'm hoping this one will end up something like what Prof's music sounds like and maybe a bit of twenty one pilots, also I just replaced the suck my dong with move along

That's a good alternative, I applaud your creative thinking, as I am sure that I could not make such a thing as you have.