Also 1st post

I suggest having a character who has to solve a puzzle, like in the movie Saw. Also, don't forget that there's a lot of imagery in writing that's not visual, like auditory (such as creepy sounds) and organic (such as hair on someone's neck standing up). I think having those things make it scarier for the reader.

I had gotten Chapter 1 to 6 done you can mostly find them in my images and as of now I need help for what to call chapter 7

I'm not good at naming chapters. If it gets too hard, I've seen plenty of books that don't name them. So they would just call Chapter Seven 7

I found a good name for it it’s gonna be “Hello friends,welcome foes"

That seems good. I think a lot of authors name chapters AFTER they write them. I suppose they might think about what exactly happens in that chapter, and then think of something short and clever that goes with that.

Chapter One
“Johnson Toy Co”

Standing In front of a door, Benjamin grabbed his phone and started recording, saying:

“If you're seeing this message, then there’s a good chance I’ve gone missing...
I found it; Johnson Toy Company. Maybe I can go inside and restore it so I can get it back making toys and stuffed animals…Only one way to see..”

Ben opens the door to find everything clean like it was just done being built…

“Strange…it’s like new…” there was a loud crash nearby.

“What was that!?”

The last thing Ben saw was a tall figure before everything faded to black.

-1 hour later-

Ben opens his eyes seeing that he is tied up and on the ground and the first thing he does is trying to set him self free before the person comes back.

But it’s too late the person was in front of Ben

“Well well look who it is.” The person said..

Why is the person wherein a mask Ben thought right before the person took the mask off.

“Vanessa?!” Ben yells

“The one and only Benny” Vanessa says

-End of Chapter One-

Not bad.

I do the opposite I do the chapter name 1st then write the chapter I’ll give you chapter one right now