yooo this is cra cra, okie so id say the right eye kinda "falls off the face" a little so id pull that outer corner in a little and allow her face to be the outline there, and id also pull the right side of her chin and jaw outwards to correspond with the perspective of the nose and where it's facing, and the left side of her cranium kinda dips in a tiny bit, id also move her ear up a little since the the top/the middle of the ear should line up with the eye, and also id allow for her jaw to have a bit more of an angle instead of the slight curve up to her ear, and this last thing can be a personal choice but id add a deeper color to the crease of her lid to make it look more present and purposeful <3 (hope this helps, awesome drawing btw π)