-I’m gonna change the fact that his face was mutated by some explosion. It contributes absolutely nothing to his character. I guess I was trying to make him some cool, mysterious character who always wears a mask because it’s edgy and cool, but to be honest, once I did his face reveal it kinda didn’t matter anymore.
-I’m gonna change the fact that he lives on some small forest island in the middle of the pacific. How would he be able to get to places?
-The last part about him quitting the Navy because he realized he hasn’t had a single free choice in over 30 years is probably going to go. I think I dramatized the last paragraph a BIT too much.
Aaand yeah that’s it, I’m gonna post the lore rewrite and Spectre’s lore in the lore stream later today.