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We're my rating?

7/10

actually make that a 7.5/10

7qj6du.gif (click to show) I will take that

It’s not finished and I messed up the part in pen

8/10 Great car drawing. Whats the thing on the side of the left side of the chin?

*cat

oh srry *car

nyroom

**cay

***CAT

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Rate and critique

7/10 I like the expression and the eyes! The shadows should be a dark blue or a darker shade of the objects color though. A shadows natural hue is blue. I would make the horns a little thiner so they look less like animal ears and more like horns. Also, T-shirts have a neckline (which is the part outlined in red on the left)

Thank you! I’ll try to keep the tips in mind ^^

Here.
Took me 7 hours.
(I drew thus DAAYYYSSSS ago.)

6.8/10. Only because I can't really see whats going on. The moon, just like the sun, gives off light, so it would shine on the character too. Pine trees start off pointy and thin on the top and curves out. It seems that you've done it the other way around. Thank you for participating!

*this

6.3/10. Coloring is a bit patchy and goes outside of the lineart. Thank you for participating <3

Thanks I don’t really color that much

Oh thats ok. Going over the same spot repeatedly can fix that

Is it okay if I show a couple images instead of one?

yeah sure!

Okay.
I'll just do 3 images by grouping a bunch in one. If that makes sense :p

First ones, my main oc. right one was actually a photo of myself dressing up as him, converted to anime with AI, then redrawn by me. Left one I drew entirely myself.

7/10 I like the character design and its very memorable which is good! The highlights on the hair are a bit random though. I would suggest adding the light brown from the roots of the hair to the end of the hair instead of just random spots. You should add shadows from more realism.Using a real life model (online or irl) as a reference can help. Even taking photos of your self in the same position can be used as a reference.

Thanks, there's a bit of an inconsistency as in some other drawings of him, he only have the pair of rings on his shoulders but not the ones one his chest, but that could be justified as him wearing a different jacket.

I typically use references when I draw, usually screenshots of 3D models in Gmod, for example on the left I used a picture of Miles Edgeworth, (which is why he's built like an ace attorney character in the right image.) I typically copy the way that the reference image is shaded, and I like to keep it simple, not using more than 3 or 4 shades of the same color.

Thanks for the tips on the hair too, I usually try going for a highlight outline, and have smaller lines that follow the outline, then more random ones sprinkled in the middle, which is a bit difficult to not make it look too cluttered since most of my drawings are pixel art.

This is my secondary oc, a companion of my main, obviously not entirely drawn by me, both of these bottom images are just from pokemon, but I edited the middle one in MS Pain, giving him a jacket, gauntlets on the legs, and the circular device enhanced in the top image on the side of his head.
The bottom image is the same, just an edited sprite from the game.
There's another inconsistency here, being that his talisman / chip appears on both sides of his head, despite him only having one, I originally didn't intend this, but I decided to just say that he takes it off and puts it on the other side sometimes.

10/10 I love all of it! I would make the middle ones shadows a little darker.

I also have a few more of the second character. The top one took me a year lol.
(Note: I did NOT make the backgrounds, those are actually maps from Gmod, from which I also used ragdoll mods as templates for the top 3.)

9/10

I actually do have 2 more groups of images, if u wanted them.
If so should I put both images at the same time? Or wait for you to talk about one first like I have been doing?

Wow, thanks, it is a bit cute innit? But I assume by shadows you mean what the yellow arrow is pointing at? The lines that indicate where his actual body is under the jacket, otherwise the shading outside the jacket and braces weren't done by me.

The part that the red line is pointing too is actually stitching marks on the jacket.
(Sorry if I'm spamming you with these btw just tell me if I'm giving too many comments here, or if you would like more?)

Oh no. I meant on the green fur area. And no I dont feel like are spamming me. I love the attention lol.

Ah, I didn't actually draw the fur, but thanks :D what would you rate the other ones I showed?

sure

6.8/10. Maybe try a different color for you outline. (ex. black.) Since this seems to be a Bendy oc, if you compare you oc to Bendy, the eyes are very small so increase the eye size. Your character is smiling and when your eye kinda wrinkle at the bottom when you smile so adding those would make it look more expressive. For the coloring, its slightly patchy so layering it would help with that. (or try markers). Face can be a little more symmetrical. I know this was all VERY nitpicky and judgemental. Sorry about that. Thank you for participating

ok

question, is this fanart of a character of an oc?

my oc

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7/10 Your lineart is very clean. The body is a bit off though. Shoulders an a person usually aren't that sharp (even if it a cartoon). Ok this is gonna sound creepy but, since your character is a human of some sort its gonna have a groin (yes the crotch). Your legs dont just abruptly end like that. Try looking at a human reference online. It helps a lot!

BTW The drawing was cut

Oh no i didnt mean at the bottom i mean't when the inner thigh connects the the torso

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