i will be nice as possible

No more F**KING MEMES

We're my rating?

7/10

actually make that a 7.5/10

7qj6du.gif (click to show) I will take that

It’s not finished and I messed up the part in pen

8/10 Great car drawing. Whats the thing on the side of the left side of the chin?

*cat

oh srry *car

nyroom

**cay

***CAT

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My art is considerably crappy, but I am interested in your thoughts!

Here.
Took me 7 hours.
(I drew thus DAAYYYSSSS ago.)

6.8/10. Only because I can't really see whats going on. The moon, just like the sun, gives off light, so it would shine on the character too. Pine trees start off pointy and thin on the top and curves out. It seems that you've done it the other way around. Thank you for participating!

*this

It's supposed to look unfinished. (bc it is)

DISCLAIMER: I AM VEEERRRRY HARD TO PLEASE AND AN VERY NITPICKY. PLEASE DO NOT GET OFFENDED BY MY OPINION. thank you :3

I'm offended/jk

Very interested in what I'll get cuz this took 2-3 days.

6.9/10. I love the color scheme! Heres my critiques: Where did the right chest go? The arms never really cross over the chest (for women at least) unless if your in an unnatural postion. Keep the arms behind the chest area. The kanji and the mushroom are a little squished together. The lips are oddly shaped. Personally (i get that its part of the art style) I would make the eyes a bit smaller and the lining on the top thicker to symbolize eyelashes. Thank you for submiting ur art! <3

It's just art style that's why there isn't any right chest- And you're welcome ^^
The kanji was hard to transfer from paper to digital, that's why it's squished-

oh ok!

My friend gifted this to me, and he always like to see how to improve his art, although he does have a screwed up methodology

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You won the hunger games

LET'S A F*CKING GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

look at my latest post

I saw it

cool

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yeah

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7/10 Your lineart is very clean. The body is a bit off though. Shoulders an a person usually aren't that sharp (even if it a cartoon). Ok this is gonna sound creepy but, since your character is a human of some sort its gonna have a groin (yes the crotch). Your legs dont just abruptly end like that. Try looking at a human reference online. It helps a lot!

Understandable

BTW The drawing was cut

Oh no i didnt mean at the bottom i mean't when the inner thigh connects the the torso

Oh, Aight

pls help me get better

8/10 Literally amazing! I would outline the hair with a darker color because you cant really see what going on unless if you look very closely. The shoes need a bit of work too.

Oh yes and it might be because of your art style but please add a nose and mouth. I know that they are really hard to draw but please please do!

my pen couldn’t go darker for the outline :(
I suck at shoes fr

dont worry i suck at shoes too :_:

6.3/10. Coloring is a bit patchy and goes outside of the lineart. Thank you for participating <3

Thanks I don’t really color that much

Oh thats ok. Going over the same spot repeatedly can fix that

Rate and critique

7/10 I like the expression and the eyes! The shadows should be a dark blue or a darker shade of the objects color though. A shadows natural hue is blue. I would make the horns a little thiner so they look less like animal ears and more like horns. Also, T-shirts have a neckline (which is the part outlined in red on the left)

Thank you! I’ll try to keep the tips in mind ^^