hmmm
sometimes a lot of detail can be good
don't be afraid to throw in some sappy adjectives sometimes too
in my Sally Face fic [Salvis] this is the last paragraph ish of what i've written
- "Thanks," he said as Travis started flipping through the pages in his notebook. Sal oohed at certain drawings and smiled wider at others. Finally, Travis flipped to the drawing of Sal with the mask on, his blue hair practically glowing on the paper. Travis blushed and looked away. Sal looked down at the drawing of himself and smiled. He lifted his prosthetic and looked at Travis, his face redder than it normally was, even with the scars.
Travis smiled back and leaned forward unconsciously. Sal looked at Travis with his ocean-colored eyes and they blushed even more. -
