All mistakes:
“i” needs to be capitalized
“a” needs to be changed to be “an” (an is for not just vowels, but letters that its sound at the beginning is a vowel)
“y” needs to be capitalized (the drawing hid the period)
“and” needs to be changed to “that”
“y” needs to be capitalized (the drawing hid the period)
the “the” with the arrow means that “the” needs to be added between “suffer” and “consequences”