bronco temp

Your the drug I always needed
You burn a warm fire inside of me that never ends
Around you; I never feel defeated
You know I want to be more than friends
My feelings for you intertwine like threads
I can get lost in your eyes and never see the earth again
My anger and sadness just descends
Please let this lucid dream never end

I don't mean to be rude but.. *you're.

Your poem is really good though!

thanks for the correction, I'll make that change for the sake of my english grade

You're*

Ik, made that correction

okay Shakespeare i see you

lol

3/10. Really cheesy.

Yea. It is pretty cheesy. And the topic is kind of unoriginal in my opinion. My friends have written poems that are 10 times better than this

bet you can't do better

You asked for my opinion on it, don’t get mad when I respond.

I'm not mad. just stating facts.

Well you do have a point, I hate poetry so I don’t really bother with it.

k

But yeah I’m terms of how you worded it it’s about an 8 or 9

thanks for the feedback

Yw

bitch who the f**k you think you are kendrick in a pimp to a butterfly

bru what

nvm

You're*