Some times if i'm afk MEME_BRO or JIMMYBOIIII might help me roast. Again, the comments get heated fast this might offend you.

Good luck lol
This is Ruko - cybernetically enhanced, eventually gets a bionic leg.
(The pic does not show much so here is some backstory)
He’s a highly trained assassin for a very messed up organization (in a world of dogs - it’s a dystopian book that I’m writing). He is actually nice and kind but very messed up mentally after being forced to kill his best friend. Has a brain-link chip that can essentially turn off his memories and therefore his strong morals. He can remember everything he did afterwards which increases his already severe PTSD. Will kill you if given reason without any regrets.

This looks like a damn sock puppet with no mouth, how does he has a bionic leg if it looks like a puppet. What kind of sh!tty name is ruko? He is a highly trained assassin? What does he do, bite them to death? Why would he need to turn off his memories then he will forget all his training lol. Wow, an organization of dogs.... Very uh, creative?

This made me laugh 😆

(Ps, I just read the backstory so scratch a sentence off)

First, you insulted my art, not the character
Jeez what did your mom name you? Yikes….
Yes, but only if necessary. Try getting bitten by a dog sometime, you will have a much higher appreciation of teeth lol. It’s not his only method.
Hey, it’s roughly based on some amazing art and animations. First is the story of 86 on YouTube and Skallias webcomic no north.

Now for the nerd stuff
The organization he works for turns them off. He is more like a robot controlled by them. It’s like a switch.
You don’t need memories for training, it’s more of a reflex and muscle memory. And they can turn off certain ones - it’s not just a blanket wipe.

Side note
Idk what other people genuinely think about it - what are your actual thoughts?

Well my mom named me Justin Valadez, rare name from Mexico . Funny story: when I was 6 I got bite by a dog in the ass, my ass started bleeding. For the nerd stuff that makes a lot of more sense and its a pretty cool idea. And now my real thoughts: The back story is pretty sick and I would feel it would make a good action game or movie BUT dogs, like dogs, kinda weird but I would think it would be better to be a human. The art work for the dog looks like a sock puppet but was made on a crumpled up piece a paper. But regardless of that I think its pretty cool.

That’s a cool name tbh
Lol
It’s humans selectively bred these super intelligent dogs to replace human soldiers, but then a nuclear war broke out, wiping out almost all the humans. The dogs took over. Idk I don’t write humans well, and it may be too similar to CA: The Winter Soldier, even though I had the idea way before I watched the movie or knew it existed.

Hm, thats pretty cool. No more sock puppet lol

Try this

Bro no way they made a chiniese rip off of my boy Pegasus from Hercules, bro he looks like pigeon. What kind of magical horse-pigeon-dragon stuff is this? Like bro chose one, flying horse or peacock, like you tried to add a trashy peacock tail on it. Ngl the wings look cool.

You may need to get your eyes checked, as there is no peacock or horse in this. Have you ever seen a peacock?
Thx

Its more of a combination of both as the legs belong to a horse and the tail belongs to a peacock

It’s actually half dog half bird lol.

Damn it. So close, So far.

Lol

Want to go for round 3 aussie? Put in another one that is hard to roast.

Make me laugh.

(can't really roast this because its kind off cool but i'll try my best) Bro the stick man war game got a update and added the hoe faction, their symbol is just a lazy H. Bro where is his face? Its gone just like my father. The gas mask filter is just a tire from a car lol.

LOL good roast man good roast, especially the tire from a car and the dad being gone that made me felt weak.

Thanks dude, I try not to make un original roast like " nO bItChEs", It was quite hard to roast this because it looks sick, its quite rare to see a military-like OC. Good work.

This is Grit. do your worst.

(ik this is a picrew but it's literally the only pic i have of them on my school computer)

That thing just looks ridiculous, If I were your father I wouldn't hang that on the damn fridge, Hell I wouldn't even hang that any where. It looks like a autistic kid wanted to make a fallout death claw but wanted it to be a dragon too, jesus christ. I hope the holes you drew EVERYWHERE are bullet holes because I want that to die. WHAT KIND OF DRAGON WEARS JEWELRY? Man this looks so- oh wait, your name explains everything.

Ha, as someone who is autistic and a reasonably good artist this is hilarious

But it looks good. I can't even draw a stickman lol

This is Ameila. She has a boyfriend. Roast her.

OMFG, I would like to kill my self. I dumped 67 gallons of bleach and my eye yet its still not enough. How tf does she have a boy friend, its a chinese mickey mouse. BRO WHAT IS WITH THE BIG @$$ hand?! WHAT DOES SHE DO IN HER SPARE TIME?! If I were your father I wouldnt hang that on the damn fridge

DAMN. Thats a nice roast! :o

Thank you comrade

Okay just don’t say he’s “unoriginal” because he looks similar to Bendy…I did that on purpose for his design….

Ok: What kind of bendy like train driver is this? He only has 4 fingers, and don't get me started on the neck, wait, he has none! He stole boris' overalls and painted them black. His horns are odd. Also what kind of goofy name is jasper merridow? Thats all I really got for now because my brain is the size of a brunt rasin and I can't think of any thing original.

Well all rubberhose cartoon characters have 4 fingers

ngl that hurt me with the overalls

oh

Yeah its a thing people do on purpose lol

Okay.

It is now canon that jasper stole Boris’s overalls and painted them black.

Yup, good lore.

Yez