My warriors book, chapter one!

Chapter One BrindleKit, a dark brown Tom with white stripes had been play fighting with HalfKit, a white she cat will red and orange splotches in the nursery. BrindleKit’s brother, PuddleKit, was watching the clan meeting and flicking his tail impatiently, as if he were waiting on something. “Hey PuddleKit!” BrindleKit began, “wanna play with us?” PuddleKit glanced at him. “No. If I do, I’ll become too keen with your ‘fighting moves’ and it will affect my ability to learn.” He explains quickly and clearly. “Come on PuddleKit.” Dawnlight, a brown she cat with white stripes meowed. “Play with your brother. You’ll miss all this free time when you are a warrior” His mother reasoned. “Ugh” PuddleKit groaned as he walked over to where BrindleKit and HalfKit were located. “Alright” and in a split second, he felt weight crash onto him, pinning him down. And he looked up to he his brother smiling. “Always keep your guard up!” BrindleKit suggested. PuddleKit stood up, shook his pelt, spat, and stormed away. BrindleKit shrugged and sat down. “Hey HalfKit! Do you ever wonder-“ he broke off with a shriek when he saw a flash of dark brown and white fur, and felt a cat land on top of him, and once he finished yelling, he looked up to see PuddleKit with a smirk. “Thanks for the advice, maybe you should follow it!” He joked, unpinning his brother. “Aww, my little warriors!” Dawnlight commented, adoring their little quarrel and how it’s ever so similar to a warrior. HalfKit’s mother, a beautiful all red she cat who’s name is BrightClaw smiled warmly at her daughter. As the sun had set, PuddleKit couldn’t help but feel excited, for he and his brother would be apprenticed soon. He had been waiting for this day for so long, and he was going to train to be the greatest warrior. “When I’m an apprentice, I’ll train hard, I won’t let anything get in my way!” He started, thinking nobody could hear him. “I’ll be the greatest warrior this clan- no- this lake has ever known! I won’t let the fresh-kill pile go empty! I won’t let other clans cause problems! I won’t let-“ “PuddleKit” Dawnlight spoke his name softly. “That is a delightful speech, but it is time to go to bed.”