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Please give constructive criticism | Oct/12/20##; SCP-8014; Euclid; SCP-8014 is to be contained in a 1x1x1 meter cube, with all parallel sides perfectly matched. SCP-8014 is to never be brought outside of said cube without a majority vote of the 05 Council. SCP-8014 is a igneous rock resembling matter from Proxima Centauri b. If matter is located on all sides of SCP-8014, it will leave its dormant state. When in it's active stage, it will "scan" in all directions. This scan can only be picked up by audio devices, and cannot be seen in any form. Once said scan is complete, it will enter one of two stages. If all sides have a near-perfectly parallel match, it will enter it's dormant state. If at least two sides are not near-perfectly parallel, it will begin it's aggressive stage. When in it's aggressive stage, it will cause all matter in a 20 meter radius to reach temperatures up to 50C. Afterwards, it will return to it's dormant state for 20 minutes. When SCP-8014 has returned to a dormant state, it cannot complete another scan for aprox 20. hours (if it has not entered an aggressive stage before returning to it's dormant state). | image tagged in scp document | made w/ Imgflip meme maker
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Waffle-the-questionable M
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For those who had trouble reading!

Special Containment Procedures:
SCP-8014 is to be contained in a 1x1x1 meter cube, with all parallel sides perfectly matched. SCP-8014 is to never be brought outside of said cube without a majority vote of the 05 Council.

Description:
SCP-8014 is a igneous rock resembling matter from Proxima Centauri b. If matter is located on all sides of SCP-8014, it will leave its dormant state. When in it's active stage, it will "scan" in all directions. This scan can only be picked up by audio devices, and cannot be seen in any form. Once said scan is complete, it will enter one of two stages. If all sides have a near-perfectly parallel match, it will enter it's dormant state. If at least two sides are not near-perfectly parallel, it will begin it's aggressive stage. When in it's aggressive stage, it will cause all matter in a 20 meter radius to reach temperatures up to 50C. Afterwards, it will return to it's dormant state for 20 minutes. When SCP-8014 has returned to a dormant state, it cannot complete another scan for aprox 20. hours (if it has not entered an aggressive stage before returning to it's dormant state).
ihavealotoffreetime
0 ups, 2y
pANcakes r better
change my mind
Site909MaintenanceChief
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Noice SCP
Waffle-the-questionable M
1 up, 2y,
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Thanks. On a scale of 1-10, how original is it (please be honest, don't just tell me what I want to hear).

Also, any constructive criticism?
Site909MaintenanceChief
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Its about a 4 because not many people have done anomalous rocks these days
Waffle-the-questionable M
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Well, any way to make it better?
Site909MaintenanceChief
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Maybe make an addendum edition for it so u can have a connection it and a different scp?
Waffle-the-questionable M
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That is a fantastic idea! A cross-test with different SCPs (not 682, let's not give him melting powers). I'll make an addendum when I get the chance.
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very good catch comrade! i can not wait to study this interesting creature! the science team thanks you!
- dr bastarache
Waffle-the-questionable M
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Thank you!
-Intelligence Agent Waffle

-OOC

Also, have any constructive criticism about it?
[deleted]
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not really, i think it's fine the way it is, but if you want to make any changes, be my guest!

dr. bastarache
Waffle-the-questionable M
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Thanks!
[deleted]
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no problem comrade! always glad to be of service!
-dr bastarache
Waffle-the-questionable M
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Oct/12/20##; SCP-8014; Euclid; SCP-8014 is to be contained in a 1x1x1 meter cube, with all parallel sides perfectly matched. SCP-8014 is to never be brought outside of said cube without a majority vote of the 05 Council. SCP-8014 is a igneous rock resembling matter from Proxima Centauri b. If matter is located on all sides of SCP-8014, it will leave its dormant state. When in it's active stage, it will "scan" in all directions. This scan can only be picked up by audio devices, and cannot be seen in any form. Once said scan is complete, it will enter one of two stages. If all sides have a near-perfectly parallel match, it will enter it's dormant state. If at least two sides are not near-perfectly parallel, it will begin it's aggressive stage. When in it's aggressive stage, it will cause all matter in a 20 meter radius to reach temperatures up to 50C. Afterwards, it will return to it's dormant state for 20 minutes. When SCP-8014 has returned to a dormant state, it cannot complete another scan for aprox 20. hours (if it has not entered an aggressive stage before returning to it's dormant state).